That's an excellent cliff hanger. You answered several questions, the Dean paragraph was nicely done. An interesting question is: which Tonks talks to Harry and Sirius? I'm guessing its the real Tonks, but you have Bellatrix roaming the castle as polyjuice Tonks.... I am very impressed with how you've plotted this all out, you must have a master chart up on a wall somewhere just to keep track of everything. I hope if the Sirius character survives we get a monologue of his plan! I'm excited to see how the big battle/reveal goes and I'm basically a hopeless romantic so, I'm rooting for a happy ending. I know the HEA can be annoying for authors to write, but since they only occur occasionally in real life, it's nice to read them in fiction. Of course, it's your story and regardless of the ending, it is a classic and outstanding.
parakletos Friday 9th December 2016 23:04
Chapter 14 (Author Response)
Thanks for your reviews and your PMs. I'm always amazed at the imagination of readers and sometimes think 'why didn't I do it that way?'
The big reveal? Well if you've read stories like 'And on the 8th day' you will remember that not everything is revealed.
I like a HEA, but sometimes they don't fit the plot, so I'm afraid that you will have to wait and see.