I must say that this is one of the most original ideas for a story I have come across in a while and also one of the best executed and written. I hope you keep it up and I look forward to reading the rest as it comes through. Good Luck!
this was a very interesting chapter. wow what an idea. How fare will this story go? Are you going to write more books to go along with it? Is harry going to tutoring from each of the teacher that stays with during the summers? Oh, so many questions, will you have time to write the next chapter if I keep asking you questions?
keep up the great work.
oh, i love this kind of fanific! so randomly cool, you know? sort of like "how on earth did you actually come up with this?" but its so good! what a difference that would have made if Vernon died. you got harry's personality down spot on too! excellent job!
Ah, I was sure it would be Severus.....good for you for taking a different path. Poppy knew Remus well, and so knew a good bit about James and Sirius, too. The summer in Hogsmeade....this should be interesting....
This looks very interesting - I can't wait to see what you do with it. I can see several directions for you to take it and any one of them could prove quite entertaining.
I'll be looking forward to more - your writing style is pleasant and overal, you have good grammar and spelling. One friendly nitpick - in one paragraph you mention how Dumbledore calways has a way of "peaking" Snape's interest and I believe it should be "piquing" which is the spelling you use a little further on.
Anyway - so glad to see something new and different to read!