Wow! You've done a terrific job of showing how George is not coping with Fred's death, even though he puts on a good show to others. I'm glad Parvati came to her senses and told George to "grow up" as it were and to stop trying to make other people into something they aren't and can never be. It sounds harsh, but it's reality. Well done.
Author by Night Monday 18th July 2016 09:52
Chapter 1 (Author Response)
Thanks! This fic has been years in the making (and was even a Christmas special parody at one point), so I'm glad I found a way for it to work. George does indeed have some growing up to do.