i had a question, is the sequel: Sacrifice of Love allready posted? because i really liked this story and i was wondering how it would end and everything, but i cant find the story? hope someone can help me?
I like the way you are developing Lily and James relationship gradually, I like the fact that it is more of a natural progression rather than one minute they hate each other then the next they love each other. It's much more believable how you have written it. Great action with the attack on the train, love it!
I'm glad to hear that about Remus!! Great opening chapter! I love the way you have written the relationship between the Maurauders, you've definitely captured the easy, comfortable camaraderie they have with each other.
Where is "Sacrifice of Love"? I just found this story a few hours ago and have finished it and I LOVED IT. You write so well, and your characterization was SO GOOD! I wasn't expecting it to end there. I just see that this was last updated in May, so I was wondering if you'd decided not to write part 2 or something like that? Anywho. Great story and I'd love to read more, if there is more!
Wow I can't believe that this is the end of part one! I am so looking forward to Part II! It will be sad though... with Peter's betrayal and everyone suspecting everyone else of being a spy and James and Lily's unavoidable deaths... sniff. But with you writing it, hopefully there will be some laughs and fluff along the way!
That was abrubt! Poor Meg...If only she had listened to Moody.
I certainly know how Sirius feels - and Lily, too. I hate it and love it when I leave a school. You're free - but then reality sets in and you realize how nice it's been, knowing people and feeling secure.
Lily and James are doing well. That is nice to know that James wants to wait and not pressure Lily. It is too bad about Meg. She is doomed to unhappiness the way things are going. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p
Lady Chi Sunday 20th May 2007 17:58
Chapter 22 (Mature) (Author Response)
She's kind of a doomed character, yes... but then, I kind of like her. Thanks for your review and your continued support!