Wow, what a start to a story . . . I can feel Harry's pain. Wonderfully
written and I will DEFINITELY be sticking this story through to the
end, especially if the quality is anywhere NEAR that of this chapter. :D
I am just starting you Fan-Fic. But I must say that I like the struggles you are starting Harry off with. More real-life you might say.
I am looking forward to see how the characters develop and grow. Especially where Harry how a more intimate knowledge of his fate.
Good start to the story but I'm not entirely sure that Harry is going to be so devastated over the summer by Sirius death. I think he will be grieving, but I also think he was starting to heal before the end of OOTP. I do think, however, that he will either be dwelling upon the prophecy or he will be acting in denial concerning it and this will be torturing him. All in all however a most excellent begining.
yay! you finally decided to post here! Now, I HAVE to re-read this story, which means, less time spent working at my computer (I'm gonna be fired!). Oh well, not everything in life is working, the Law can wait a little bit, don't you think? (except that I REALLY need to write those 5 opinions, lol!)
Melindaleo Monday 2nd August 2004 12:51
1: Solitary Grieving (Author Response)
Yep, finally got the nerve to give it a try! So far, all you guys are coming back! Thank you. We'll see if it attracts any new readers.