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Sunday 22nd May 2005 10:03


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77

Centrifugal Force
i wish you wrote a sequal...unless you did and i havent found it yet. lol. thats possible. but i loved it haha. 
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Monday 9th May 2005 21:23


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10

Centrifugal Force
Differant, let your hair down, relaxed kind of weekend....
I love it.

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Delylah
Monday 11th April 2005 13:08


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

Centrifugal Force
Just read this and wanted to let you know I thought it was a wonderful short story.  It brings back such memories.  I've always thought carnivals were romantic, and you brought to life quite vividly all the smells and sounds and sensations. I loved that Harry knew what was going to happen on the Matador, but didn't let on and obviously didn't mind. You characterized Ginny and Harry both beautifully...Ginny with her fearless attitude and Harry's own shyness.  I enjoyed the way that they just naturally paired up (with some help from Hermione!)  and grew comfortable together. This is going on my list of favorites :-)
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Mary
Monday 11th April 2005 06:13


Centrifugal Force
Very cute!
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x_Rose_x
Sunday 27th March 2005 13:09


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 48

Centrifugal Force
loved it!!! really cute!!!
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Saturday 19th March 2005 19:03


Centrifugal Force

How nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for sequel!!!

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Friday 18th March 2005 21:20


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 368

Centrifugal Force

This was wonderful! I'm dying to go to a carnival now- I haven't been in about five years.  You wrote this wonderfully, and it certianly was a unique plot!  Most people can't pull it off too well when Harry and Ginny get together quickly, but carnivals have a knack for doing things like that and you sure took advantage of it.  I noticed you said no sequel "yet" at the beginning- does that mean that there could be one later?  I'd love to hear about the rest of the weekend with the Grangers, and also about Harry's shopping trip with Tonks.  You could really turn this into a great summer fic!  I'll keep my eye out for more of your work,

Narumi

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Sugarquills23
Friday 11th March 2005 09:08


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

Centrifugal Force
This was adorable. It brought back teenage memories. Very sweet.
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Sunday 27th February 2005 09:33


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 91

Centrifugal Force
This is such a cute story. I remember going on rides like that one with girls I had a crush on when I was a kid, it was always so much fun. You really capture the feelings and worries of H&G so well in this one. I love the recurrance of the cotton candy -- that just seems to sum up the entire carnival experience so well, with Ginny's curiosity and wariness and desire all in one. 
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gwenstarr
Tuesday 8th February 2005 13:05


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 43

Centrifugal Force

i love this!  i definately think you should try a sequel or expanding on it! 

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Saturday 1st January 2005 10:47


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 51

Centrifugal Force

Great story!

I loved the cotton candy scene!

I'm glad you didn't have any of them kiss, it leaves expectations for more though. But if they did it would have felt so rushed.

I can't wait to read your other stories. This is my first of yours to read so I could see your writing stylr and I think I'll happily read the others. Your writing is nicely detailed and I like it. 

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Saturday 18th December 2004 10:18


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 141

Centrifugal Force

Very cute!!

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Friday 3rd December 2004 00:40


Centrifugal Force
I reallly enjoyed your story.  It is a nice change to see the foursome act like teenagers .  I wish this story were a little longer. I just finished "The Power of Emotion"    I love your work and look forward to reading more if it!
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Saturday 27th November 2004 19:59


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 123

Centrifugal Force
^_^ that's really cute
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Sunday 21st November 2004 15:34


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

Centrifugal Force
Cute and lighthearted....just what I need right now! This was awesome, and everyone still seemed pretty much in-character and for a one-shot, very well developed. I love rocking the ferris wheel!!! I got so jealous of H and G while reading this! lol! On a side note, I'm SO SO SOOOO glad you're writing sequel to HPPOE!!!! I just noticed that, and it made my day! YIPPEEEE!!! *goes off to read*

Alabaster
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Sunday 21st November 2004 12:51


Centrifugal Force

hehe

sequel?

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Saturday 20th November 2004 04:35


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

Centrifugal Force
It was really nice and fluffy    , you could make another chapter
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Pirate Ginny
Friday 19th November 2004 00:21


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Centrifugal Force

Wow...I thought I'd read all of the carnival challenge fics, and nearly didn't read this.  I haven't read the others for a long while, but I suspect this would be among my favorites.  :) 

I especially love the understated understanding that arises between Harry and Ginny.  Ginny's attempts to resist sliding into Harry...boy that takes me back.   I had to squeeze next to a boy I liked at the Haunted Mansion and just *knew* everyone would see how red my cheeks were once we got outside.  Thank goodness for Ginny that Harry didn't mind. 

 

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HPNana
Thursday 18th November 2004 16:03


Centrifugal Force

Hi Melinda!

I loved the story. I enjoiyed the fluff and maybe a story can be borne from it! How about a summer story where Harry is able to relax and just be a teenager.  Centrifugal Force would make an excellent first chapter, keeping in mind how his friends also have experiences from  the MoM and maybe they too would just like to "chill out" as my daughter says. While they are trying to distract him maybe they can have some clean, innocent fun for once? And the pairing!!!  The pairing is coming on with a lot of subtleness and casualness. What do you think?

Best Rgds,

HPNana

Melindaleo
Thursday 18th November 2004 16:40
Centrifugal Force (Author Response)

LOL, that's not a bad idea at all, and actaully, I have considered it.  I had to go back at Fanfiction and put ONE SHOT in big letters cuz I kept getting emails for an update!  Maybe I'll go back at some point, but I've got other bunnies in my head at the moment.

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DADAGinny
Thursday 18th November 2004 12:48


6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277

Centrifugal Force
Very sweet and fluffy, like cotton candy (wink).  Nice job!  I'm glad Harry got out of his depression with Ginny!


Melindaleo
Thursday 18th November 2004 16:39
Centrifugal Force (Author Response)
Thanks!  It was fun for a one-shot, although I think it will take more than this for poor Harry in canon.
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