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Sunday 2nd July 2006 10:50


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Aww that was really good! I wanted to add a quote from the chapter but I couldn't pick a favourite.. That was perfect.. and it really fits in with the story! Your work is, as always, great!

Dan

PS, I did say I would review all your stories when I got around to it..
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Renzo
Wednesday 31st May 2006 22:35


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awesome work man, extremely well done. I definitely agree that there wasn't nearly enough romance in HBP and I was dying to hear more about the Ginny - Harry relationship, and this was far better than I would've expected. Grats buddy, keep up the good work ^^
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Wednesday 26th April 2006 21:48


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 57

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I really liked this. I thought that this was missing from HBP too! Thanks for writting it.
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Zia Montrose
Thursday 9th February 2006 09:53


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
I thought this was really well done!! Spine tickling warmth!
First, you showed that teen awkwardness of "well we kissed and we're holding hands, what now?" Second, Harry pulling out an oozing frog is adorable and he doesn't even know it! Third, Ginny, as usual, holds her own in a cheerfully brave manner. Very in character for both of them! I hope you continue to write and post. Thanks for the enjoyment.
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Monday 7th November 2005 16:51


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 30

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Lol! Aw, so cute! And it seems like it would happen that way! (Them not walking too far or talking about the match much!) So adorable! 
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UTChick
Tuesday 13th September 2005 08:26


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Wow - I love it!!  Ok - I gotta wipe the huge silly grin off my face - people are going to wonder what my problem is.  This is what was missing in HBP!! 

I like your style - you have a gentle way of painting a picture like this:  " Harry looked up into her eyes and saw a pretty blush covering her cheeks. She turned her eyes away from his and bit her lip. A warm, pleasant feeling erupted inside him. She'd been paying attention to what he liked to eat."  This left me with such a warm feeling - so much of your writing does this to me.  It's this insight that I like so much.  It's been hard for me to pinpoint what I like about your style, but this does show a part of what I like. 

Thanks for sharing it with us.  I always know that your writing is a delicious treat to read!

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Gridley
Sunday 4th September 2005 07:48


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 160

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
I think this is a very good, and highly probably, missing moment. Thanks for sharing it with us!
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basketballbabe15
Sunday 28th August 2005 13:29


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great work.

its a really interesting story, do you like chocolate??

are you going to write a post hbp, cause it would be an amazing story, please please please write one, we have to wait sooo long for the next one. think about it.

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Friday 26th August 2005 08:23


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 159

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
What a great missing moment.  Not to fluffy, and an excellent one shot.  Keep it up.
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Velvethope
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 13:27


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 27

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
This was lovely - it was sexy, sweet, fluffy, but not too much. Very very nice. Now I'm almost afraid to post my version of the scene - it'll pale in comparison. lol

Hmm...you're good for cheering me up when I'm feeling particularly depressed about this fandom. I must remember that!


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HP_Sauce
Sunday 21st August 2005 17:13


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Yay! That missing scene was driving me nuts!  Very nice I loved it! I really hope you write more one shots....and possibly a Post-HBP?

lol, well great job as usual!

 

~~~HP_Sauce

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Delfino
Tuesday 16th August 2005 18:20


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 238

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Oh, this was amazing and super, super cute. A little to advanced for Gin and Harry's first day together, but wonderful all the same. Great job!
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Sunday 14th August 2005 07:35


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 141

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

*dies*

What a perfect "missing moment" scene!  I absolutely loved this, and thanks for writing it!

Awesome!

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Pirate Ginny
Friday 12th August 2005 18:29


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 50

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Hurrah.  Well done.  It's always a treat (erhem) to read your work, and it was nice to have a short piece to dive right into.  :)  Oh, the chocolate...
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Friday 12th August 2005 14:48


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 15

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Oh, that was fun!  I agree with you, far too little romance in HBP.  I bet their story comes around again in the 7th book.

I sure miss reading your updates every Friday.  Perhaps there's another story lurking in the near future?

Thanks!

S_I

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WIZ
Friday 12th August 2005 08:58


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THAT WAS THE BEST ONE ABOUT HARRY'S AND GINNY'S WALK AROUND THE LAKE THAT I EVER READ.
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DeadlySecrets
Thursday 11th August 2005 21:29


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Aww! I've been looking for a fic that described the walk! I was so pissed off when JKR didn't describe it.

But here it is! =) Great job! I enjoyed it! The first time Ginny licked his fingers gave me the creeps, though. But the rest of the chocolate scenario was quite funny. And they didn't talk about the match, did they? *big grin*

~ DS, who's thinking about chocolate...
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critmo
Thursday 11th August 2005 02:46


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 692

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Good, especially the idea that the kiss was initiated by both of them. My own version in the "mood-series" will be different, but I like the idea! - However, the chocolate game by the lake seems slightly over the top for a first encounter - to me, at least. Still, great story!
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Anni (whenpigsfly8992 on FictionAlley.net)
Wednesday 10th August 2005 17:31


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Hi!!! I've been waiting for more short stories, and I was so happy when I saw this one! I loved this. I think it should have been in HBP...It just seems right.

And the Chocolate Frog part, very nice touch!

I don't think Harry and Ginny's separation will last long either. They deserve each other, and it wouldn't be right if they aren't together.

And now, I bow to you.    I've never read anything that was as good as your stories (Well, except J.K. Rowling's, of course!)

~Anni

 

P.S. Now we must wait for Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire to come out in theaters!! You know, I really wasn't surprised when I found out they rated it PG-13. I'm just wondering if Disney Channel still thinks it's a good idea to show the Harry Potter movies now!

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Wednesday 10th August 2005 17:13


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 38

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
WOW!!!!! i have really missed reading your work and i am beyond pleased that you have written a HBP outtake. this was a great story and i hope you write more and not just outakes either after all my weekends just haven't been the same :)
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