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Wednesday 10th August 2005 13:18


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 196

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Maybe you should change the name of the story to { Something about those Chocolate Frog} Lol!]

It was cute and fluffy. loved it!

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harryheartsbeeve
Tuesday 9th August 2005 13:45


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

you're fanastic i love this story

yet again you've come up with a wonderful story

you made my day lol

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Spark Soliton
Tuesday 9th August 2005 11:58


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 98

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Yay - another story! Whoho!

A belated review - your posting came as a pleasant surprise and thus I'm late with expressing my pleasure with your new story.

It's a pity in a way that JKR never managed to write as good as you do - but on the other hand it is lucky, as she has generated a lot of authors that quite frankly outshine her at the moment!

I think you nailed Ginny's personality just right and it was pleasure to read! I hope that the plot bunnies cometh forth again - I seem to remember that you had another little plot bunny starting to grow sometime aroun Easter, any hopes of that growing into something?

As always it was a pleasure to read your story! I hope you Ginevra is enjoying the summer BTW as much as this Ginevra is in your story.

Thanks for writing and sharing this! Cheers, Spark Soliton

 

 

 

 

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huskers
Tuesday 9th August 2005 11:13


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
This was great, maybe a little much with the licking of chocolate off of each other, but who cares, because you are dead right about there not being enough scenes with H/G in HBP.  And I'm praying you are correct about the breakup not lasting.  Somehow I think it will.  Oh, if Harry and Ginny both live, I think she gets him in the end, but only after he has defeated Voldemort.  Really hope I'm wrong, because I would like to see her at his side while he goes after the horcruxes and Voldemort.
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Monday 8th August 2005 20:30


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 16

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful! I LOVED the chocolate part! I squealed when I saw this fic. YAAAYYY A MELINDA FIC!! I've been deprived of your writing for too long!

-Padfoot Lives
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IHateSnakes
Monday 8th August 2005 17:19


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Thump, thump, thump...pant, pant, pant...Wow, Mel, you can sure put it in words!  I love the line: "' You kissed me? I thought I kissed you,'"  It reminded my of a LONG time ago and and early G/F.

Then I got to the part with the frogs...that reminded me of another G/F...who became my wife!

Now, having said all that: I wonder about kids of their age, even though I write Gin's personality/sexual identity very similar to the way you do I have a little trouble seeing some of that scene in a 16 year old...but what the heck...great job.

Snakes

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Monday 8th August 2005 16:07


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 237

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Thank you ! Thank you! Thank you! I could keep right on saying "thank you" and it wouldn't be enough. I've been waiting for someone to write this outtake from the book. You've done it perfectly too.

I loved the part when Ginny and Harry challenged one another about what they knew about the other. That was very well written. And I also loved the squishing of the chocolate frog so Ginny could kiss some more off his hand. Very nice touch.

This was some awesome fluff, and you get an "O" for outstanding.

Job Well Done. :-)

Now, if you're up to the challenge, you should write the Quidditch match. I would love to see Ginny snip the snitch right under Cho's nose.

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Bella
Monday 8th August 2005 12:51


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 77

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Favorite quote:
<<"Treacle tart, broomsticks, and you -- yeah, that covers it,">>

Fabulous! I had a silly grin on my face the whole time. Yay, I'm so glad you decided to write this! Definitely my preferred version of the events of that walk. Excellent.

Bella

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Monday 8th August 2005 11:49


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 111

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Fantastic! This is definitely my favorite out of all the "Walking Around the Lake" scenes!
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Monday 8th August 2005 11:11


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 26

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

I was so happy to see that you had written a missing moment from HBP.  Very good as usual.  I don't think that the separation is going to last either.  I hope that you have plenty of ideas to write about.  We have another 2 years to wait for the next one!

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emmamoonpotter
Monday 8th August 2005 10:49


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 68

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Melinda I love this wonderful one shot.

So fluffy and sweet. A bit naughty too with Ginny licking the chocolate from Harry's fingers. Yum. 
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Hank
Monday 8th August 2005 09:35


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 195

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Very nice!  Loved the bit about the chocolate!    And you're right, Harry does deserve to be happy.  I just wish Rowling would have left a little less to the imagination, but there's always PhoenixSong!  Thanks for sharing!
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Monday 8th August 2005 09:03


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 81

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
*smiles*    That was very cool,  and fits the moment perfectly.   I would have loved to have seen more focus on Harry and Ginny in the book... but then OTOH, it does give you room to play in... :-)   
I agree that the separation thing won't last long,   Harry's 'power' is love after all,  he needs Ginny by his side.   And yes,  he certainly deserves to be happy. :-)
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Musings
Monday 8th August 2005 07:34


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 99

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Okay, if I sigh any more there won't be any more air in the room.  This is just delightful, Melindaleo!  Just the kind of missing moment we need -- full of romance and humor.  And our boy is happy now -- very, very happy!  Thank you for sharing this with us!
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Monday 8th August 2005 05:59


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 29

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Ooooh... Chocolate... :D

Very nice... very nice. Thank you!
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kaiserzacc
Sunday 7th August 2005 23:49


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 57

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
i think that you have captured the mood of that particular scene quite well...well done
Melindaleo
Monday 8th August 2005 05:41
Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny (Author Response)
Thanks!  I had lots of fun doing this one.  I love Harry's new attitude.
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Sunday 7th August 2005 23:00


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 452

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
Whooo-ooo!  Yes!!!  Oh, I was ever so happy to see the kiss happen in HBP, your take on what happened after they got away was just as nice.  One definitely needs to bring chocolate wherever one goes, you never know what needs might arise.  Though your beast might hide its head in shame to begin with - even slightly melted chocolate has its (highly seducive) uses....

Great fic!  I love having my favourite fanfic authors returning to explore canon, and yes, you're one of them.

Thanks for sharing!

Berte
Melindaleo
Monday 8th August 2005 05:40
Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny (Author Response)
Aww, thanks!  I love that monster in Harry's chest.  It's my new favortie character.  I thought the H/G tension started right off with how amused he was by her and her disdain of Pleghm.  I was on a h/g high throughout the whole story, lol.
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Logan_macLeod
Sunday 7th August 2005 22:35


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny
I have read your stories before and I am really hoping that youright a story picking up where HBP left off 
Melindaleo
Monday 8th August 2005 05:39
Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny (Author Response)
Thanks.  I'm not planning on writing another full seventh year fic, but I do plan on continuing some ficlets from the CotD universe.
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Sunday 7th August 2005 22:02


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112

Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

Amen! I totally agree with you there.  Hope to read another excellent fic from you soon.

Melindaleo
Monday 8th August 2005 05:38
Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny (Author Response)
Thanks.  I have one other in mind, but I haven't begun working on it yet.
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Miriam
Sunday 7th August 2005 21:15


Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny

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Great story!!

Melindaleo
Monday 8th August 2005 05:16
Treacle Tart, A Broomstick Handle, and Ginny (Author Response)
Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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