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Saturday 6th September 2008 15:26 | The Picnic | | Okay, first off, I just love how James dwells on asking Lily or not, until Sirius takes matters into his own hands, which,I suspect, might have been for his own Marauder humor; my idea of Lily is a little bit more Hermione-ish than yours so I expected her to have a little renitence at the boys' rule-breaking habits, but your version feels natural as well.... so overall, a great, great story..Good job! | gymnastgal19
Friday 28th March 2008 22:22 | The Picnic | awwwww!!! I loved this story!!! It was awesome!!!
haha i love how siruis was taking all those pictures
the ending was adorable!
| gymnastgal19
Sunday 11th November 2007 00:17 | The Picnic | haha i love it:p Im glad that james toned down lol
siruis taking a million pics of them that was so siruis like :p
| Novera
Monday 17th July 2006 12:21 | The Picnic | | Very romantic story | MissPenny45
Friday 3rd March 2006 19:26 | The Picnic | | awww cute. that was really good! | Pugpal
Tuesday 5th October 2004 22:17 | The Picnic | | AAAWWW!!! Sirius snapping pictures was pricless |
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