chiantiqueen
Monday 14th January 2008 05:59 | The Love Of Flying |
| Love that ending!! Brilliant! |
bookish327
Monday 22nd October 2007 20:03 | The Love Of Flying |
I wonder what contest themes you had to fit into the story. The Firebolt photo session? The perfume? "How long has this been going on?" "Harry, were you seeing the lovely Miss Lovegood?" "Great balls of fire." "What were you doing in the girl's toilet, Malfoy?" My last pick would be either: "You wouldn't remember because McGonagall forbade us to tell anyone about it." or "It took Madam Pomfrey over an hour to clean up all the cuts."
I liked your story. Fun to see Harry and Ginny first get together with so little "to-do" and fuss. Almost like they were just normal teenagers who decided they liked each other. As if Harry's life could ever be normal. Since things were going so well and easily, it was neat for Ron and Hermione to be dating, as well. Keep writing. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 10th October 2007 22:09 | The Love Of Flying |
| lol. i love this the ending is so ron, and teh hint of panic in his voice.... |
Darth_Flatus
Tuesday 31st July 2007 19:35 | The Love Of Flying |
| fluff indeed. teeth-rotting fluff that's kinda like marshmallows. i like marshmallows |
pyromain
Monday 25th June 2007 10:43 | The Love Of Flying |
| I think you should have hermione tell ron about the firebolts right after she told him about ginny and harry. I think that would have cooled him down a bit. |
hahaheeheehaha
Sunday 25th March 2007 05:23 | The Love Of Flying |
really well written, the pov changes are great and i loved the ending
Gryffindor Tower awoke with a start. The voice of Ronald Weasley could clearly be heard throughout the entirety of the Tower.
"HARRY AND GINNY ARE WHAT?"
so funny thanks for writing heep it up |
Patches
Friday 2nd March 2007 02:08 | The Love Of Flying |
| I like this story. It is short and sweet and mushy. That and it is always fun when Malfoy gets caught even though Myrtle saved him. Now that is a match made in Heaven! I like the end when Ron discovers that Harry and Ginny are an item. Very well done. p |
chocoquills
Thursday 25th January 2007 13:06 | The Love Of Flying |
Hehehe.... love the end!
Cute and sweet! Really nice |
Arnel
Wednesday 24th January 2007 12:58 | The Love Of Flying |
| A really cute story that reads quickly and keeps the reader's interest. My favorite lines are the last two. I hope you submit more stories since I really enjoyed this one. |
nire135
Sunday 21st January 2007 22:18 | The Love Of Flying |
halarious!
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topbabe
Tuesday 16th January 2007 11:36 | The Love Of Flying |
| OMG i love this so original, plz write more! |
cckeimig
Monday 15th January 2007 21:30 | The Love Of Flying |
| Very cute. Congratulations. |
looola
Monday 15th January 2007 03:28 | The Love Of Flying |
hilarious!
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Yentila22
Sunday 9th April 2006 19:56 | The Love Of Flying |
| I like your story but it seems incomplete. I would like to read more of your work. |
Ashley06
Saturday 31st December 2005 13:01 | The Love Of Flying |
ROFL that is just so funny. I love the last line of this story, |
Ashley06
Saturday 31st December 2005 13:01 | The Love Of Flying |
ROFL that is just so funny. I love the last line of this story, |
critmo
Tuesday 4th January 2005 10:19 | The Love Of Flying |
| Nice, but I didn't understand the part about Malfoy and Mirtle. Also the interrogation in Harry's dorm is a touch too brutal in the beginning and ends too abruptly. |
jabarber69
Thursday 25th November 2004 00:06 | The Love Of Flying |
Oh this was so cool. I loved this story. the firebolt part was really cool to. you have a vivid and imaginative imagination! also this story was well written, you nailed the characters really good. especially:
"HARRY AND GINNY ARE WHAT?"
Thanks for the entertainment! |
Wild Magelet
Monday 8th November 2004 04:55 | The Love Of Flying |
| Such a cute story! I loved reading it. Great ending. =) |
