ionik27
Thursday 4th September 2008 15:30 | Okay |
| I loved this story, even if I cried while reading it! Great job at creating the thunderstorm environment for the story, it goes perfectly! Ginny's character is also spot on! You've a great style and I cant wait to read more of your work! |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 14:29 | Okay |
aww ww ww!!! Thats so cute!!
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 13th November 2007 20:58 | Okay |
interesting... I didnt really get way ginny's hand burned...
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harry fanatic
Monday 18th December 2006 18:56 | Okay |
| it was so sad . i was crying . it was well written . keep writing |
PadfootLives12
Saturday 27th August 2005 20:07 | Okay |
Wonderful, lovely, just beautiful! You are a wonderful writer. This brought me close to tears!
-Padfoot Lives
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Arnel
Thursday 25th August 2005 08:06 | Okay |
This is the second time I've read this story and it's even better this time now knowing what is to come in HBP. You've done a very nice job with the first person pov: your Ginny is so strong and Harry's characterization is spot-on. I've put this story on my "favorites" list.
Congratulations on being selected as Author of the Week! |
amamama
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 04:22 | Okay |
Sniff. All the silly things people manage to say whein they're
grieving. Harry is not the lucky one, Hermoine at least knows the
joy of having caring, supportive parents. Nice and sad - and
Harry's powers are intriguing.
Thanks!
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levotatingT
Saturday 14th May 2005 13:41 | Okay |
I'm lost for words..... That was awsome. That would be just like Harry to react the way he did. You portrayed the characters perfectly.
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Kelleypen
Thursday 14th April 2005 11:10 | Okay |
| Sweet, sad, lovely. And thank you for not ending it with a snog fest. |
| Friday 15th April 2005 14:13 | Okay (Author Response) |
I wouldn't have Ginny take advantage of him that way. ;D |
Arnel
Thursday 14th April 2005 09:52 | Okay |
First off, congratulations on having your story selected as Story of the Week!
Poor Hermione! I'm sorry she has to suffer such loss. She's lucky to have Ron, Harry and the other Weasleys to help her through this difficult time.
You've done a really nice job of telling the story through the first person, strange though it may seem. You capture Ginny's emotions excellently and she seems very much in character. I'm glad she and Harry were able to comfort each other in the end and grow as individuals as well. |
Delani
Monday 11th April 2005 20:31 | Okay |
How positively spiffing. I've probably read this before, as I'm a fan of your work, but I figured a word or two might be nice. This makes me hopeful for...for what? Hermione? Harry? Ginny? Harry and Ginny? All of them, I suppose, and more. Well done.
Delani |
Cera
Sunday 10th October 2004 19:55 | Okay |
Sorry... forgot to sign in. That was me.
Sarah |
Pineapple Queen
Saturday 2nd October 2004 22:03 | Okay |
Beautiful. Really beautiful. Somehow the tone of this story hit home with me...I love it. If we had favorites lists on PS, this would be on it. The almost...frantic feeling this story has (frantic isn't the right word...it's the best I can come up with, though) makes it wonderful. I loved the bit about Ginny saying that hating makes them no better than Death Eaters--so true.
I shook my head. "The thunderstorm has come. He likes to watch the lightning in these summer storms."
Ron looked at me in the way only a close older brother can—nostalgically, protectively, intimately. "You always liked that too."
I nodded. "I always liked that too."
This was also a great quote. Really shows how the war and the losses are maturing Ginny and Ron (especially the latter.) |
XiaoXiao
Monday 20th September 2004 04:19 | Okay |
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Really, how do you do it? It's amazing, how you blend plot elements together, and make a wonderful whole.
I love how Harry heals her, since he was the one who hurt her. |
Ash
Monday 6th September 2004 12:08 | Okay |
I remember reading this a while back, and it still rings as true and as deliciously muted as it did then! I have to nominate this for a fic award!
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Bella
Thursday 19th August 2004 12:51 | Okay |
Oh, that was great. Really, really great. You're a fabulous writer, I can't wait to read more of your stuff.
*sob* that was just so sweet!! oh my... |
853250
Sunday 6th June 2004 22:23 | Okay |
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