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Monday 25th December 2006 21:28 | Thunder And Rainbows | | It is Mrs. Figg isn\'t it? And I wonder who that girl is. Hmm | Kalenfea
Wednesday 2nd June 2004 20:39 | Thunder And Rainbows | | Looks like a great start! I really like your interpretation of Uncle Vernon's behaviour. I can easily see him behaving as if intimidated in the presence of Moody and co., but then choosing to forget their threats and the Dementor attack asap (he has an extremely selective memory!) I'm assuming that this is going to turn into a H/G (happy!), and you seem to be doing a wonderful job of subtly introducing Ginny into a larger role in Harry's life. Be careful with mentioning her full name (Ginevra! Personally, I couldn't believe it!) too often. We didn't hear it at all in the first five books; it seems sort of weird to see it twice in one chapter. I can't wait to see your next chapter! Who's at the door? Dumbledore? Remus? Evil cliffhangers! | | Wednesday 2nd June 2004 20:39 | Thunder And Rainbows (Author Response) | Ooops try again
Thanks for the review, the original Nanowrio version of this fic, wriiten back in November, obviously did not use Ginny's full name, and the only reason I have used it here, is that it will tie in nicely with a future chapter. |
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