sbmcneil
Friday 3rd February 2017 01:33 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
| I love your idea of year long projects for the NEWTs. I don't think I've seen that before. I love Anna May, she is adorable. Not a huge fan of Ron as a Quidditch captain - he seems to be a better fan than player. |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 3rd December 2009 21:06 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 2nd April 2008 16:43 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
haha loved this line:
"Uh-huh… So, Ron, when you're done, can I borrow your notes?" Harry deadpanned, and chuckled quietly as Ron's ears turned red.
and im wondering about the scene where anna may said that hermonie will be made at ron around xmas... im presuming its because he didnt propose... but then shes happy around valentines so im guessing that he proposes?
this was quite an eventful chapter!
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 7th June 2006 19:47 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
| That poor little girl. She is going to be very useful later in this story frame if you make another story after this if this one dosn't cover it. I shall find out. |
melray1228
Saturday 2nd July 2005 20:19 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
This is really great! I can't believe that you haven't gotten more reviews than you have. Your work is very well thought out. It's almost as if Jo were writing this story. Your attention to detail is wonderful. You should be really proud of yourself.
The only thing that bothers me about this story is Anna May's speech. I taught 2nd grade (7 year olds) for 4 years, and the only ones that talked that way were the ones from very uneducated families. Perhaps that's Anna May's background as well.
I really am enjoying this story, as if you couldn't tell. |
zenevieva
Monday 7th June 2004 14:48 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
| I'm lovin' it. |
p0tterfan
Wednesday 2nd June 2004 21:51 | Harry Potter and the Philtre of Promise |
Look's like Anna May's quite important to the story, and seems like a full fledge wizarding superstar
Hoping to see rest of the characters get involved too.
Like your writing, and looking forward to the next chapter. |
