chiantiqueen
Thursday 17th January 2008 09:55 | With All My Love |
| I'm glad to hear that about Remus!! Great opening chapter! I love the way you have written the relationship between the Maurauders, you've definitely captured the easy, comfortable camaraderie they have with each other. |
haileythefan
Tuesday 25th September 2007 21:00 | With All My Love |
| I've finished this story and i thought you said there is a sequel i hope there is. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 15th May 2007 15:05 | With All My Love |
| Hmm. I wonder what is happening to the train. Very good start to the story. I never really read the Marauder's era, but this one sounded interesting. :0) |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 01:53 | With All My Love |
| This is a good beginning. I like the interaction between the boys and Lily. Peter is a real non-entity in this so far. I look forward to more of this story. What is the "whine" that James noticed? I look forward to finding out. p |
Patches
Friday 20th April 2007 01:23 | With All My Love |
| A good beginning. I like the characters so far. Of course Peter is going to be a problem later so I don't have to like where he is coming from. I look forward to the next chapter. What is the whine they hear? Who or what is attacking? Thanks for writing. p |
Wooster
Saturday 17th June 2006 07:47 | With All My Love |
swear, my Remus does not a) have a moustache, and b) does not invoke suspicions that he might be a child molester. He is a creep-free Remus!! Thank god!
This is a really good beginning, and I'm excited to read the rest of it.
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Cherry
Sunday 2nd October 2005 06:47 | With All My Love |
Love this capter! Keep them coming
Cherry
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marauding_milly
Tuesday 22nd February 2005 21:20 | With All My Love |
I think I've finally found a good marauder story after quite a long time. I'm just at the begining, but I can just tell that it'll be good. I'll just go on and read the rest of it... keep it up! |
Katieay
Monday 19th July 2004 07:34 | With All My Love |
| Excellent chapter! I don't usually like Marauder tales, and am sorry to say that I put off reading this one because I don't feel I know enough about Lily and James' characters to really be in the story, if that makes sense. You've managed to make them real for me from the get go and I'm liking the tension between Lily and James, Wormtail's avoidance of Lily, the tension between Sirius and Remus has me curious and I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter to solve that cliff hanger! |
Jaquelyne
Friday 18th June 2004 23:07 | With All My Love |
Chi,
Good to see you back! I hope you had a good break.
I do like the start and have recently gotten interested in James and Lily. I look forward to the coming chapters!
~J~ |
hypnotic_angel_13
Friday 18th June 2004 00:38 | With All My Love |
NOOOO!! I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS!!! PLZ, UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!! I WILL LOVE U!!!! even though i dont know who you really are, I WILL LOVE YOU!!!
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Mr. Intel
Thursday 17th June 2004 20:10 | With All My Love |
Wow! Another novel from Chi!
Everyone, quick, come read and review!
A great beginning to a promising fic. I normally don't ready MWPP-era fics, but your characterizations are very compelling and the plot has already hooked me on the first chapter. I don't even know if there is a plot yet! LOL! |
| Thursday 17th June 2004 20:10 | With All My Love (Author Response) |
That's quite a feat, you know, to be hooked on a plot you aren't entirely sure exists! LOL! I assure you, there is one. I'm going to have to go out and find it, but I'm sure there is one.
Thanks much for your review!!
Chi |
mandj
Thursday 17th June 2004 12:20 | With All My Love |
| oww i love lily and james storys, this sounds like it is shaping up to be a good one. i liked the tentions between sirius and remus, and how peter is so...small (in stature and personality)great job i hope you update soon, i am eager for more. |
OHGinnyfan
Thursday 17th June 2004 10:34 | With All My Love |
Yeah!! Lady Chi is writing again!! I love the start of this story. I can't wait to read more. I haven't read many J/L stories in the past, but I do love the way you have them all characterized. Well done!!
Susan |
| Thursday 17th June 2004 10:34 | With All My Love (Author Response) |
I was surprised at the number of people who remarked on the characterization of Lily/James and the Marauders. I had thought that people would like more tension between them, but honestly, I just couldn't see it that way.
I'm hoping to hear from you again, soon! Your reviews mean the world.
Chi |
