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Sunday 26th March 2006 17:44 | Through His Mother's Eyes | | A woman could have it all if she puts her mind to it... Having Harry for a husband would be added bonus! | jeanne
Friday 17th June 2005 06:39 | Through His Mother's Eyes | | I have to disagree with your reviewer re. James,s sentence structure. I have a great-grandchild ,who at 3 was carrying on phone conversations with me, and was very articulate. He may have been the exception, but i hardly think so. You make it clear that Ginny has spent "His " whole life with him,and so he has been her daily source of conversation. Also the "Wizard in him" helps them advance quicker. | jeanne
Friday 17th June 2005 06:33 | Through His Mother's Eyes | | This is so good, but ,no more kids? What has happened to the fertile Weasley genes? I love the "hire " contracters, not get out the old wand and do it pronto, and what,s with Ginny using a "dish" rag to wipe up the floor? Yuck!! Even scourgify won,t do it. | Mr. Intel
Thursday 24th June 2004 10:57 | Through His Mother's Eyes | Ahh, parenthood. Great job with Harry and Ginny talking things out on the sofa. I especially liked the letter and Fred and George's response to it.
James' speech seems a little advanced for his age. I have a just turned five-year-old and she's fairly articulate for her age but nowhere near what you've portrayed James as being.
[QUOTE]D'you wanna see a picture I drew today, during arts and crafts time at school?[/QUOTE]
It's not the vocabulary as much as it's the sentence structure. Little kids just don't think that way. He would've left of the 'during arts and crafts time at school'. Kids are much more to the point than that and won't ever volunteer information. Things like that have to be pulled out of them.
Otherwise, a fantastic chapter. Keep writing! | Lady Chi
Tuesday 22nd June 2004 20:10 | Through His Mother's Eyes | As usual, I just wanted to take a minute or two of your time and tell you what a wonderful job I think you're doing on this story. It's rare that we get to see a story so realistically and relatively un-angstily (is that even a word? I don't think it is) told about Ginny and Harry after they're married and settled down.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Cheers
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