Patches
Sunday 22nd June 2008 16:36 | The Nearness of You |
| I really like this story. You've done a good job of showing the attration between both pairs of teens. I like the moment between Ron and Hermione. That was really sweet. Thanks for writing. p |
gymnastgal19
Monday 12th May 2008 22:43 | The Nearness of You |
nice story!! Im glad that ginny managed to get harry to smile
nice fluff
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gymnastgal19
Friday 11th January 2008 21:15 | The Nearness of You |
nice story! im glad that harry could make ginny laugh
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pyromain
Sunday 24th June 2007 16:36 | The Nearness of You |
| what a great way to relaxe. |
flyawayflowergurl
Thursday 2nd June 2005 14:39 | The Nearness of You |
| is that all? that cant be all! write more. i wanna know what else happens! |
levotatingT
Saturday 14th May 2005 13:21 | The Nearness of You |
AWWWW that was so cute. You played out the characters excellently except Hermione, she was on the wild side, but it still fit, and sometimes somethings have to change
great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
tante
Tuesday 8th February 2005 00:30 | The Nearness of You |
Agonizing amount of romantic tension. Delicious! I love the emotion. Well done!
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critmo
Tuesday 4th January 2005 12:07 | The Nearness of You |
| Good one, nice turn from Hermione's anger to compassion. |
bluejeanphoenix
Wednesday 1st December 2004 02:21 | The Nearness of You |
| Reminds me of that song, "Nightswimming" by REM :) Lovely. |
DADAGinny
Tuesday 23rd November 2004 17:11 | The Nearness of You |
I could very well imagine this happening after OotP. Ginny seemed
to be the only one who could get Harry out of his funks during fifth
year. I would love to see this happen in book 6.
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TigerLily8186
Saturday 6th November 2004 01:32 | The Nearness of You |
| I loved the poemish bit at the begining... wow. It was great how it was integrated into the story. Lovely job. |
Pugpal
Sunday 26th September 2004 22:14 | The Nearness of You |
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Pooca
Wednesday 30th June 2004 16:39 | The Nearness of You |
| Oh, very nice. I like the R/Hr interplay. Of course Ginny gets Harry to smile... |
DailyProphetReporting
Tuesday 29th June 2004 00:27 | The Nearness of You |
I thought you did a nice job with the perspective in this fic. Hermione's view point let you emphasize the angst in relation to both boys. I like how Harry's opening up around Ginny was pushed to the background as Hermione has her tense exchange with Ron.
Ron and Ginny's argument was also well done -- nicely in character and well used to set up Ron and Hermione's exchange.
Nicely done,
-KC |
GinnylovesHarry
Monday 28th June 2004 14:08 | The Nearness of You |
| Eeep! I really, really liked this! It was perfect, put the relationships in just the right perspective, just the right angst, and I loved it! |
Zeo
Sunday 27th June 2004 23:20 | The Nearness of You |
| Ah, wonderful. A moment of sheer joy in such a cruel world. You've done it perfectly. |
Velvethope
Sunday 27th June 2004 10:41 | The Nearness of You |
| Ah, very nicely done. Ron and Ginny made me laugh for some reason; I could so see that argument in my head. Good job! |
p0tterfan
Sunday 27th June 2004 02:37 | The Nearness of You |
| That was nicely done. A night swim ... hmm must go for that in the summer weather. |
Lady Chi
Saturday 26th June 2004 21:42 | The Nearness of You |
I think I would have enjoyed this more if you had expanded upon Hermione's feelings. Why did she think there was tension in the house? Examples or little snipets of conversations or scenes would have been sufficient to give it more of an angsty flavor.
At the same time, you were working with a length restriction and only had so much time. Part of this piece's charm is its length. It didn't take me long to read and I really enjoyed it.
Good luck!
Chi |
Cera
Saturday 26th June 2004 15:16 | The Nearness of You |
Great story!
"I'm not alone. Harry's over there," Ron said gesturing behind him. Sure enough, there was Harry, sitting on the edge of the pond, staring in Ginny's direction rather intently.
Love that part!
You have a great grasp of the characters personalities, and it really shows in this fic. Faboo job! |
