ionik27
Sunday 31st August 2008 14:12 | The Shadow of the Past |
Petunia has gone batty, hasn't she? I just love how she sounds - great job at that - and I do get why she would be scared of Lily... But... is Lily the one sending a message or does Petunia recognize James and Lily in Harry and Ginny... I think it was lily because petunia wouldn't accept magic and ghosts as fast as that...
but that can't be it... you've got to go on!
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gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 15:42 | The Shadow of the Past |
nice story... why was petunia acting all wierd... maybe it was lily talking to ginny and harry through her...
nice ending! Im guessing that harry realized that the room is full of love?
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Delfino
Monday 19th November 2007 15:58 | The Shadow of the Past |
| Haha! Brilliant! Sweet, hilarious, exciting...and well, hilarious! This was great, thank you SO much for writing it. |
gymnastgal19
Friday 16th November 2007 15:03 | The Shadow of the Past |
wow.... this was odd... first that dream and then lily going through ginny and scaring the heck out of petunia... lol
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pyromain
Saturday 23rd June 2007 15:23 | The Shadow of the Past |
arhhh you can't end there. Well you can, we can all imagine what happens next, but than again I would have like to read you discription of what happens next.
I did love the story do. thanks
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Uzamaki-girl
Tuesday 12th September 2006 17:35 | The Shadow of the Past |
| This was really good, brilliant even.^^ |
critmo
Wednesday 5th January 2005 11:21 | The Shadow of the Past |
| Good idea, although I don't like open ends. And why is it G who is sent to check on H? |
Pugpal
Monday 25th October 2004 00:23 | The Shadow of the Past |
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Cera
Sunday 4th July 2004 14:54 | The Shadow of the Past |
| Oh, that was spooky! Lily showing up at the door in Ginny's body was really interesting, and creepy at the same time. I loved the dream at the beginning, it was very well... dreamlike. Great use of the random required lines, which can be tough to use in an angst type contest. I do hope there's more to this story, it's really great. |
DADAGinny
Friday 2nd July 2004 15:11 | The Shadow of the Past |
| This is very good! I hope that it will be continued! It left so much open! |
WandlessOne
Wednesday 30th June 2004 12:46 | The Shadow of the Past |
| Oh, no no no. Don't make this a one shot. Expand! More chapters! Please please pretty please?? |
