webster
Wednesday 17th March 2010 09:15 | Together, Forever |
| Enjoyable and sweet! Liked the message as well, anyone who ever had a friend or loved one attempt suicide will appreciate this. I disagree that your first attempt was not good, continue on with writing stories such as this! |
kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 13:11 | Together, Forever |
A difficult subject, but one I personally think you handled with sensitivity.
I do like how you handled it and made Ginny 'come back'!
But someone once said 'cry not for the dead for they have no more pain to feel, cry for the living for their pain is always there' or words to that effect. So you can understand why Ginny took the steps she did. Granted it was selfish but... |
Prongs739
Saturday 30th August 2008 16:51 | Together, Forever |
This reminds me of R&J until she is brought back down.
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 18th March 2008 21:07 | Together, Forever |
wow..... thats insane.... i couldnt really see ginny doing that.... but she does love harry a lot...
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majolie
Tuesday 13th November 2007 13:56 | Together, Forever |
| Thank you for this. I know you wrote it a while ago, but I just came across it and at first was upset by what was happening. I was afraid that the romance of your story could possibly lead others to make similar choices. I was really pleased with the final message. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 7th November 2007 07:03 | Together, Forever |
wow!!!! this was amazing!!!!
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harrysnotgoingtodiein7
Thursday 19th July 2007 08:55 | Together, Forever |
| so ... sad. This is the ONE main reason why JKR CANT kill HP, its just wrong, i think you did a great job of illustrating how harrys death would shatter peoples worlds. |
pyromain
Thursday 21st June 2007 12:14 | Together, Forever |
| death is always cruel to love, to find love after your true love has died seems imposible. At least that is my opinion on the subjet, haven't found a sollution yet. |
Abbey_anne
Thursday 30th November 2006 07:50 | Together, Forever |
| This is a bit depressing, but I can sense the hope in her thoughts at the end. Nice job. |
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 17th April 2006 14:46 | Together, Forever |
WOW! I loved it even though it was really sad.
Kortnee |
cliodne
Thursday 5th May 2005 18:02 | Together, Forever |
| I really liked this short story. It was very well done with no
holes or gaps. I don't think I've read something this short that
covered every part that was needed. Great job.
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amamama
Thursday 30th September 2004 08:36 | Together, Forever |
>sniff< *wipes eyes and composes herself before continuing*
That was so beautiful, you know? So terribly sad, as I don't want this to be the outcome of the final battle, yet so full of what I see as a fundamental spiritual truth. (And I don't agree to the notion that this is pure angst). Harry's words to Ginny, 'If you loved me you wouldn't cut short what I loved most,' is a very important message that a lot of people need to hear. And quite canon, Dumbledore's words to Ginny are full of wisdom: 'those who love us are determined to see that we not choose the easy path, so that we might become greater people when the time does come for us to be reunited.' So true, we're here to learn, and to grow the most in one lifetime there's no room for shortcuts or easy paths. At least not all the time...
Thank you. |
obsidiana
Wednesday 22nd September 2004 10:02 | Together, Forever |
| Well, for a first attempt this was one darned fine piece of angst fiction....I cried and I consider myself to be one cold hearted b!tch. |
parakletos
Thursday 2nd September 2004 13:35 | Together, Forever |
| Oh Dear.. not a dry eye in the house. Seriously not a fic for the fainted hearted but that doesn't make it bad. Oh dear i'm rambling better go and find some fluff to cheer myself up. Well done. |
| Thursday 2nd September 2004 13:35 | Together, Forever (Author Response) |
| Well, there's lots of fluff under my user name! Fluffy Firsts is a good start, though they tend to get better as the stories progress. BasilM has some good fluff as does Tosca and cts. Whichever you choose, enjoy! |
