Hot48cricket
Wednesday 23rd November 2011 11:35 | Eternity Lost |
I've just finished "Shadow of Silence" and really enjoyed it! (although it was listed as Harry/Ginny....they didn't get 'together' until the last chapter!)
Nothing like starting off a new story with a bang! Nice job! |
| Wednesday 23rd November 2011 13:35 | Eternity Lost (Author Response) |
Glad you enjoyed it, hun. Sorry that it was only H/G in the last chapter, but I could see people getting aggravated if I didn't mention it
Myth xxx |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 22nd March 2008 20:53 | Eternity Lost |
:O
she couldnt save percy??
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Bryher
Thursday 1st February 2007 17:08 | Eternity Lost |
Wow, what a start! I really enjoyed your first story, but looks like this one's going to be even better! Poor Percy though And poor Arthur...
Thanks, Helen
PS Was intrigued by the idea of criminology devices... |
Kraz
Wednesday 6th December 2006 16:51 | Eternity Lost |
| Good story, one point though, near the end of your earlier story there was a major attack on piccadilly circus resulting in hundreds of muggle deaths. Now call me picky but something like that would have made the news channel in every country in the world, would have stepped the security level of britain through the roof and caused immense damage and heartache. And yet in the very first chapter you show all the Londoners going round as if nothing happened, you see this in a lot of stories where they use a major attack on the muggles that cause great loss of life within two minutes everyones forgotten it, maybe you could have mention some damage or ongoing effects. Things like that don't happen in Britain and when they do the effects can last for years. |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 27th July 2006 13:14 | Eternity Lost |
Quite the action-packed start. Very powerful. So sorry to see Percy go (well, maybe not, after what he did to Harry ; but seriously no one deserves that). Good to see the cerebral has some humanity (or whatever) left in her.
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Rocky235
Tuesday 14th February 2006 10:59 | Eternity Lost |
I don't know why I thought there would be humor and fun. I really don't.
You know what Remus does the night of the full moon?
That's right. he
Hs |
Konstantine
Saturday 25th September 2004 11:05 | Eternity Lost |
| Wow! I love your last fanfic and I cant wait for this one to get updated! You´re a really good writer! Anyway, update soon... |
hpfan
Friday 10th September 2004 22:44 | Eternity Lost |
| I've been waiting for this all summer, and it's finally here! So much suspense, keep it updated, the sooner the better! |
