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Paula
Tuesday 23rd November 2004 11:37 | Harry Potter and the Lord of Storms | Awesome! I loved it, really.
There's something about Harry and co. being eficient warriors, that I like. I can't explain it.
Oh! A little bit more of Ron, Hermione and Ginny would be great.
I'm really looking forward your next udpate. Which I hope would be soon, rather than later, though I can imagine you're busy.
Update soon, please.
Bye, take care.
Paula.
| Waywren Truesong
Saturday 18th September 2004 19:53 | Harry Potter and the Lord of Storms | | Marvellous stuff!
I loved this bit, only, shouldn't it be -have- been?:
"I getcha, Harry. In that case, you got any free advice?"
"About girls?" Ron nodded. Harry shrugged. "Sorry Ron, can't help there. My only experiences of dating were a complete disaster, and as for Haimric's... the Procella been married four hundred and ninety-six times - three hundred and four as a man and a hundred and ninety-two as a woman; they have had twelve hundred and sixty-three heterosexual relationships, two hundred and ninety-seven homosexual ones, sixty-three lesbian ones and sixteen bisexual relationships. And I'll let you into a little secret... we still don't understand girls. They are all unique."
Apparently, even being given an artifact that contains the contents of every one of its heroic predecessors' heads doesn't really make life any easier when you get right down to it...
Which is oddly reassuring, for some reason.
Ta muchly for sharing all your hard work with us!
| Bring and Fly
Friday 17th September 2004 06:11 | Harry Potter and the Lord of Storms | When I started reading this chapter I had forgotten that I had read the previous one so I was a bit startled to find Harry talking to someone else in his head. Just for a minute I thought 'sounds like The Order of the Phoenix as written by Ruskbyte'.
However, I clicked back to the first chapter and read through to number five with attention and I'm glad I did!
I especially like the idea of the artifacts coming from the earliest parts of wizarding society and I really like the twist about Slytherin! That kind of thing happens all the time, the more so as history is written by the conquerers, who distort things to justify their actions.
So, at the end of all that, I shall say that I will wait your next update and read with attention and enthusiasm.
Well done on finding a new twist for an old theme! More power to your quill!
Cheers, Bring and Fly. |
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