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gymnastgal19
Sunday 23rd March 2008 17:29 | Eternity Lost | woh...
the ending is a bit odd..... what were her emotions....
| jan10002
Monday 16th July 2007 19:56 | Eternity Lost | | every storie I read makes harry stupid, I wonder why.. | GryffindorDragon
Thursday 27th July 2006 15:20 | Eternity Lost | parents' last gift to him now almost gone - hmm, not sure about this; Harry's vault in book 1 contained a small fortune -- even leaving off interest accrual, it is doubtful Harry's education would reduce it to almost nothing; and you seem to have forgotten his inheritance of the Black estate (chapter 5 of "shadows of silence") which is fully his now that he is of wizarding age.
Nice action there at Diagon Alley; but I'm sorry; unless Bella is a weight-lifter, she is not going to be able to hold him; and where all of the sudden has his soul resonance disappeared to. It has supposedly been getting stronger, but whereas before that he could easily dodge Dumbledore , now he is so easily captured by Lestrange. Not likely.
| Rocky235
Tuesday 14th February 2006 12:41 | Eternity Lost | | I went and read a couple chapters of 'Recnac Transfaerso'. You know, just to lighten things up a bit. | Ash
Friday 8th April 2005 22:56 | Eternity Lost | | Oh, that was easy. Harry and his concern for his friends . . . oy vey! | parakletos
Tuesday 19th October 2004 20:42 | Eternity Lost | As ever a great read, and as ever I want more.
Thanks
| Bring and Fly
Tuesday 19th October 2004 04:48 | Eternity Lost | Blimey! You don't believe in taking prisoners do you! Another action-packed chapter and a new turn as well as a hanging ending.
I really want the next chapter soonest! And I HATE Bella. Just so you know. | takon65
Monday 18th October 2004 22:24 | Eternity Lost | | Oh my! This is a great story. Just frightening enough for the Halloween Season. I sort of hope that Neville shows up and rescues Harry in the next chapter--Bellatrix needs a good comeuppance and Neville needs abit of revenge. Keep up the good work! Update Soon |
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