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Reviews For Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss by Mr. Intel

gymnastgal19
Tuesday 6th November 2007 16:59
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
haha i love this! I was wondering what was put in something that they ate, cause of the buzzing feeling that harry had :p lol
I love how molly knew about it since the first time that they met :p

pyromain
Monday 3rd September 2007 12:10
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
The twins did it again I think the line from the TV-serie the A-Team could be there moto "I love it when a plan comes together".
lacyrachil
Wednesday 13th December 2006 07:35
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
Wow. I really like your work...now I really want some chocolate chips. That was almost sensual...heck, it was sensual. Great work.
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 27th February 2006 20:24
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
Wow another great story. I have read them all prior to reviewing them all and this was probably about 4th on my top 'chapters of this story' list. It was great but I liked a few others better. Look forward to the next story of yours I read!
Kortnee
hermionegreen
Tuesday 25th January 2005 22:23
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

I think my favorite chapter of this story is the Berry chapter.  I love strawberries myself, the whole fic is very sweet.  I look forward to what ever your muse produces next.

'Mione

pixiellie
Tuesday 18th January 2005 15:42
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
This was very cute!  I so enjoy you take on how Harry and Ginny will get together.  This time, with a little help from the trickster twins and some enchanted chocolate.  Well, chocolate does have some wonderful romantic applications...*grin*
I have to say, my favourite part was Harry's arrival, and the way George and Fred greet him.  There is something perversely comforting about having long time 'family' teasing you this way.  Plus, I had a great deal of fun imagining the words to the song about knickers they were singing...
I love the way you write Harry and Ginny.  The tension was obvious.  It was interesting that Harry needed to almost overdose to make his move.  Ginny had a great deal less than he did, and she was brave enough to meet him half way.  (smart girl) 
Baking wise, I'm not sure Molly would have the perfect light grey baking sheets.  She seems the type to go old school iron- more like basic black.  The kink Gramdmas always seem to have.  Plus, how much butter did they use exactly?  (Um, not that this is important to the story.  Ignore me.  *Sheepish grin*)
Molly and Arthur discovering our love birds, and getting the facts from the twins while trying not to look to happy was priceless.  I love that Molly keeps the twins from using this to embarrass our couple.
Finally, the romance was built up nicely.  It was fun to see Harry as the one with a crush, and Ginny teasing him with the batter.  Great job, and I can't wait to read more of these little takes of fluff.
Wednesday 19th January 2005 11:28Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
F&G can be so fun to write.  They've got Harry pegged and know how to antagonize their sister like no one else.

Glad you liked my fluffy little story.
DADAGinny
Tuesday 16th November 2004 16:58
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
Again, with Molly seeing everything!  I love that Arthur was going to ask the Twins to help!  Thank was great!  And the part about Harry playing with the knickers!


DaFalcon
Saturday 13th November 2004 09:55
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

Well, I just realized that this wasn't the first. I have no clue where I've been all this time, but I'm glad I've arrived. I'm about to read the others that preceded Chocolate Chip Cookies.

What a wonderful way to start the weekend! :)

DaFalcon
Saturday 13th November 2004 09:36
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

Awww, what a wonderful story. I love this. I can't wait until the next one. Harry and Ginny are so cute. I could just picture them on the couch passed out. And with George and Fred being in this made it even better. I love the twins.

What a wonderful start to your series. Please post again soon.

Katieay
Friday 12th November 2004 16:42
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

Sorry it took me so long to review! NaNo got in the way of reading/reviewing

This chapter was lovely. I loved how Harry dealt with his jealousy over Ginny's date - or rather how he didn't deal with it.

I thought the licking of the faces was really quite strange  I should have known the twins had something to do it! Very fluffy Mr. Intel, good job

Friday 12th November 2004 17:00Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Thanks, Katie.  I hope to be the source of more great fluff for you to be distracted by. 
Majick
Wednesday 10th November 2004 12:35
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

That was really cool  I've been a fan of your 'First Kiss' series for a while now, and I'm so glad to see another one online. I think it's great that you're experimenting a little with the characters of the two of them, as well as the situations (and times) that you place them in. I love the twins in this, especially the way they seem to know how to treat Harry.

I hope to see more from you in the future

Wednesday 10th November 2004 20:10Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
The twins were quite fun to write, especially as they were there through their prank, mostly. 

I hope what I have in store for the next installments are just as fun for you to read.
Antonia East
Wednesday 10th November 2004 11:27
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I haven't seen these before.  Where have I been?  I've just read the lot, and boy was that a lot of fluff.  But very very good fluff!
Wednesday 10th November 2004 20:06Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Thanks for 'tripping' into them, then!  Thanks for reading and especially, thanks for reviewing. 
TigerLily8186
Tuesday 9th November 2004 23:38
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
*sigh*nothing like a good dose of fluffy goodness before going to bed..... *sigh* Thank you for writing all these fluffy stories.. They are so alike yet different..though I am noticing the 'I don't they he/she likes me like that or I shouldn't like him/her like that' theme. But that is one of the best ones. ~Megs
Wednesday 10th November 2004 20:05Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Hmm. Thanks for pointing out that recurring theme...  I'm going to have to come up with something else for the next bit, then. :D
tony
Tuesday 9th November 2004 09:26
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!!! 

But, please, please, please (and I know it would mean braking the tradition of this series) - would you consider writing a sequel?

Marvellous, as always. And a good idea for a hot first date, too
Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:24Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
It would be breaking the tradition of the series, though I have another story that's growing so long that I'm going to have to make it two parts.  Still, it has more of a 'plot' than this one.  So unless I could come up with something compelling for a second installment, I'm afraid this will just have to do. 

Thanks for reading!
Bring and Fly
Tuesday 9th November 2004 06:10
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

Then demonstrating that his mind and heart were acrimoniously divided What an excellent line, and so descriptive.

At this point, I have to confess that I had read this on your LJ and thought it lovely and fluffy then, so I am delighted to be able to tell you 'in person' as it were at the Song. Yes, the premise is a bit cliche, but written so well that its easy to get caught up in the tale and miss the clues that you dropped. I also thought it would be the kind of thing the twins would do. Just because they didn't say anything about Ginny, doesn't mean they hadn't noticed Harry's attraction to her.

I laughed out loud at the things they said to Harry when he first arrived. Very  in character, IMHO. I like this one and will read it again, and I hope that you pick up the Astronomy tower one again at some point, 'cos being an old softie, I liked that one too!

Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:23Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Well, thanks for reading it again!  And especially for reviewing.  The Astronomy story is one of my favorite uncompleted stories.  I just wish I could figure out where to go next!  That and the fact that I'm deep into CotM and Coming of Age, etc.  Writing time is hard to come by. 

/ rocks!
amamama
Tuesday 9th November 2004 03:48
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Cool.  Sweet fic, now I feel like baking a batch of choc chip cookies myself.  I won't have any vibrataclasho tincture to put in the dough, though.

One small nit: "First rule in the kitchen is, you've got to were protective clothing" - I suspect you mean wear, not were.  About 2/5 from the top.

Keep going - I love these first kiss scenarios you think up.

Amamama

Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:19Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Fixed!  Thanks for spotting that.  No matter how many eyes see a story, six pairs in this case, some things manage to slip through. 

Thanks for the great review.  I've got some more in the planning stages, so hopefully, we'll get some more posted soon.
Robert Owen
Monday 8th November 2004 23:37
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss
Chuckle, chuckle!  Love the way the twins set this prank up!  On the couch, covered in chocolate smudges and love bites.  I'd love to be around for that awakings!
Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:17Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
I considered writing that scene, but scrapped it in the end, thinking it would just add to the air of mystery.  Even my own curiosity is sated, knowing that the rush of a new love is often tempered by real life and in the absence of a real plot, this would be the best place to leave it.

Thanks for reading.
brios
Monday 8th November 2004 23:03
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

 I don't know why, but I'm not receiving your email updates (note to webmasters and/or admin: need a crying emoticon here pronto!) :`(  nevermind! found it  (note to self: click on show all link next time!)

Your name appear on my update list, and I already try removing and adding it again.  What could be the problem?

As for the story, excellent as always.  And no, I didn't break the law this time to read it lol,  

chocolate chip cookies are my fave ones, but somehow, I'll not be able to look at those cookies the same way lol!

Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:15Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Double check the e-mail address you have in your profile.  Other than that, I can only say, you're one of 107 people that do get the notification. 

No, I don't think you'll have quite the same batch of cookies as Harry and Ginny enjoyed in this chapter.
blinieldar
Monday 8th November 2004 23:01
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to steal a line from Dickens-"Please Sir; may I have more?"
Tuesday 9th November 2004 10:13Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
More Fluffy Firsts?  But of course!  I've got two or three more in various states of development.  But they'll have to wait while I work on CotM. 
Kelleypen
Monday 8th November 2004 22:12
Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss

Shucks.  I feel all warm and fuzzy inside.  Well done.

By the way, you might want to have Bring and Fly Brit pick this for you--I think they measure in grams--quirky Brit stuff like that.

Kelley

Monday 8th November 2004 22:40Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
  Glad to make your day, Kelley.  I had several people brit pick this one, but the measurements never came up.  I'll check it out.


Ima Quidditch Fan
Monday 8th November 2004 21:58
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Chocolate and snogging... great combo!  This was very sweet, and I just love it!   Gotta' love the twins.  So, did Ginny eat any on her date?  Is that why she had to rush home?  And Harry ate a whole bowl of batter!  Ha-ha..  It's a wonder they made it out of the kitchen.

I'm sorry, but did you say that there will be no snogging in 'Letters of Summer'?  I've waited so patiently... really, none?  Not even a little peck of affection?  Seriously, you need to rub off on him a bit...  you're both such wonderful writers, but we need the LOVE!  

Monday 8th November 2004 22:39Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
Ginny didn't have any because she was too preoccupied with Harry and because she didn't have any feelings for the guy that was there.  That would have been disastrous!

As for TLOS, you're going to have to talk to Kokopelli yourself.  I'm afraid all my coersion has done no good.  Still, despite the lack of tonsil hockey, he's spun a fantastic tale.
Kokopelli
Monday 8th November 2004 21:52
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It's true, there are some things you just don't want to test out with your brother.

JEC
Monday 8th November 2004 22:37Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response)
And anything involving vibrataclasho tinctures is one of those things. :P