Dad Friday 30th April 2010 11:40 | Consequences |
Unusual. A sort of sideways step from the "run of the mill" storyline. Excellent one shot! |
gymnastgal19 Monday 21st January 2008 19:12 | Consequences |
nice story :p how come i knew that hermonie was gonna do that :p
the ending was really sad though... even if malfoy IS such a git :p
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LoonyMae Monday 17th December 2007 20:44 | Consequences |
I really like this one. I sent it to all my friends and they all love it! Fantabulus Job!!!!! |
lacyrachil Monday 11th December 2006 13:13 | Consequences |
Wow. It was a myriad of emotions...almost erotic and powerful then sad and reproachful and unthinkable. Wow. Thanks for writing. |
Narumi Saturday 9th July 2005 22:28 | Consequences |
wow. nice. i don't think i've ever read anything quite like it. you wrote the seduction scene quite well. hehe. |
flyawayflowergurl Friday 3rd June 2005 16:13 | Consequences |
aaaaaawwwwwwwwww! that was so good. u need a sequel! yea, malfoy died, but it was sad why he died! |
levotatingT Saturday 28th May 2005 10:50 | Consequences |
How sweet. That is really sad though. No expecting the Malfoy suicide. It was definitly an eye opener, I liked it
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Saturday 28th May 2005 10:52 | Consequences (Author Response) |
This was my first attempt at a darker fic. I'm glad you liked it.
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sonicdale Friday 18th March 2005 12:10 | Consequences |
Beautiful.
I'm so glad to see some sparkling moments between Ron and Herm. Some fic writers get all caught up in H/G that they never see the very smurftastic romance JKR has going on in the background. Thanks for showing that.
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Eressea Thursday 2nd December 2004 22:40 | Consequences |
Augh! Hermione and Malfoy! Okay, once I got past that part, it was pretty good. I was there waiting for Ron to hit Malfoy over the head with a shovel or something. Very nice plot twist. Rather interesting idea, about him commiting suicide and Hermione feeling guilty. Great story! |
Shadow Hider Saturday 27th November 2004 20:38 | Consequences |
oh wow. |
Nigel_Black Thursday 25th November 2004 09:11 | Consequences |
man... you sure scared me for a moment... H/D? thank god it wasn't. good show of a person's guilty(in Hermy's case, no need) conscience |
Robert Owen Thursday 25th November 2004 02:29 | Consequences |
Poor Draco! Well, he got what he deserved in the end and a nice touch in that Hermione would feel bad about it. |
linchpinism Wednesday 24th November 2004 23:30 | Consequences |
hmmmm...i don't like the turn of events after hermione's encounter with
malfoy. it's very....fanfiction-al. maybe that is the point?
the story was interesting, i can give you that.
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p0tterfan Wednesday 24th November 2004 22:05 | Consequences |
Interesting one shot ... I don't particularly agree with the way characters behaved, but well written nonetheless.
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