gymnastgal19
Tuesday 11th March 2008 07:00 | I'm Sorry |
nice story
nice little ending
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majolie
Monday 3rd December 2007 10:39 | I'm Sorry |
Cute ending. I found your Harry angst a little overdrawn - or maybe just his behavior while feeling angst. It seemed a little ove the top, but the ending was very nice.
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| Saturday 8th December 2007 21:44 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I find Harry to be pretty explosive, so I figured it was a good match. BUT thanks for a constructive crit and not a flame... so much nicer to read lol. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 20:56 | I'm Sorry |
so adorable!!! Ginny was always there for harry! you know, in canon it was never mentioned about ginny being possessed... lol
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Shadow Hider
Tuesday 30th November 2004 17:17 | I'm Sorry |
| aww ^_^ |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:26 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
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Mrs.HarryPotter12
Tuesday 30th November 2004 09:29 | I'm Sorry |
awwww so good! I loved the argument!
Lain |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:24 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
Thanks!!!
Can I say I absolutely love your name?
I absolutely love your name! |
Arnel
Tuesday 30th November 2004 01:44 | I'm Sorry |
I love Ginny at her fiestiest and you've done a supurb job of showing her at her best. I also feel she cares deeply for Harry and that compassion comes out well in your story, too. I really liked your story.
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| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:23 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
Bouncy, bouncy, bouncy, bouncy... sorry, I'm easily distracted, and your bouncy things are quite entertaining to watch.
Thank you so much! Fiesty Ginny is so much fun to write! |
Delani
Monday 29th November 2004 23:27 | I'm Sorry |
"For the first time since he could remember, Harry Potter sat down and cried."
Such an effective line! This was a different approach that I enjoyed; thank you, master hobbit, thank you.
Michelle |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:21 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
I like that line! Lol, I think that might be my favorite in the story.
You're welcome, and thank you! |
brios
Monday 29th November 2004 22:04 | I'm Sorry |
| Awww how sweet. |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:20 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
| Thank you! |
mary-v
Monday 29th November 2004 16:36 | I'm Sorry |
This was beautiful, simply wonderful. This is exactly how I'd expect Harry to act summer before his 6th year. Well, please write more!
~Maria~ |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:18 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
| I agree! (Although the book was different... I'm not complaining, though lol!). Thanks!!! |
Iris
Monday 29th November 2004 13:45 | I'm Sorry |
hmm, my computers acting up, so lets try this again...
that was a great bit of fluff at the end
Loved how Ginny talked some sense into harry.
Do write more.
~Iris |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:17 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
| Write more to this story? Or in general? In general, definitely, but I think that's it for this piece. Thanks a bunch! |
Iris
Monday 29th November 2004 13:43 | I'm Sorry |
| awww |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:16 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
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Bring and Fly
Monday 29th November 2004 06:18 | I'm Sorry |
Short and sweet! I do like a fiesty Ginny and your Ginny certainly shot Harry down in flames!
Damn it. He had forgotten again. Yes he had, but he's only fifteen and, I sometimes feel, a bit stunted in the emotional growth department so that line felt kind of right.
Well done! Baffy
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| Saturday 25th August 2007 22:14 | I'm Sorry (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I love fiesty Ginny and I think she really is the only one who can bring him out of any sort of bad mood he gets into. I think it's the red hair... lol! |
