gymnastgal19
Thursday 11th October 2007 22:14 | Epiphany |
| lol i love that harry is planning this |
critmo
Wednesday 23rd November 2005 07:50 | Epiphany |
| Jewelry? He's not starting out cheap. |
Jelsemium
Wednesday 29th December 2004 01:03 | Epiphany |
Must-review-story...
Cute start, J1. I liked Harry's methodical approach to planning how to Woo Miss Weasley. Lists are such useful things.
I had Harry give Ginny a cat, too! Great minds think alike!
The idea of Harry surreptitiously reading poetry and maybe copying it into his notebook during History of Magic makes me .
As for the dress robe... it might be easier for him to buy a gift certificate and send that! (Easier for the owl to carry and he won't have to know her measurements.)
Must-Review-Next-Chapter... |
p0tterfan
Thursday 9th December 2004 23:54 | Epiphany |
| Did Harry have an epiphany about Ginny all of a sudden? You jump
right into it don't you :) Let's see what he does with
these gift ideas ....
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| Tuesday 14th December 2004 17:31 | Epiphany (Author Response) |
| Again I thank you all for your reviews of this story. Please hav a look at my others if you so desire. Thanks for your great comments and as soon as our computer problem gets resolved at home I'll try to post another chapter or two. Thanks for everything! |
Stormdelver
Thursday 9th December 2004 15:48 | Epiphany |
| Ok- had to review this- I have seen this sort of thing go quite bad you know, first hand. It seems that women take this sort of this as "buying" their affections, paints them as a scarlet woman in the words of Molly. But overall its waht us desperate, and clueless men do just to show how much we care- not in the way it can be taken. So to Harry I wish luck and hope it doesn't burn him too bad, and we will just have too see how this all sorts out. I do like the story though, and of course H/G is my ship- but I see a serious fight in the horizon. |
Arnel
Thursday 9th December 2004 10:35 | Epiphany |
I love Harry's attitude in this chapter, especially
"I know what's prophesied, and maybe it is time that I live a little, he thought, because when the time comes it could be me that dies. Maybe it's time I grow up a bit and accept what life has dealt me."
This is an incredibly mature attitude which not too many authors choose to have him take. I also like the fact that he's admitting to himself that he fancies Ginny and is willing to risk showing her how he feels, even if he doesn't itend to do so for several months!
Now for Chapter 2... |
Kelleypen
Thursday 9th December 2004 08:44 | Epiphany |
| Nice beginning, Tony. So did you do something like this when winning your "Ginny?" |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 9th December 2004 07:15 | Epiphany |
Nice start Tony! I liked it the first time and I think you've made it even better. Off to the next chappie!
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