Ash
Friday 17th June 2005 09:28 | I Will Be Waiting |
| Some very sweet moments in here. I had never considered Percy being the brother most likely to be nice to his littlest brother, but I bet you're right there. |
| Friday 17th June 2005 11:29 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Percy as a nice brother, well he had to be at some point, and
it makes his later betrayal all the harder to take for Ron, but their
later reconciliation all the sweeter, even if they both had to die for
it to happen.
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Bunny
Wednesday 19th January 2005 09:47 | I Will Be Waiting |
Well I wasn't expecting Percy.
I like the idea of the Weasley clock, it said that nearly all of them were at peace, with just his as travelling. Did Percy's get removed? Although the story states "but now it was just like it had been all those years ago with just his mum's, dad's and siblings' hands." Was he at peace as well?
Looking forward to the next.
Val |
Nundu
Thursday 23rd December 2004 16:04 | I Will Be Waiting |
'At peace'
I'm crying now, you know.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Saturday 25th December 2004 04:15 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
Wow!
I'm more than pleased, because that means I got the emotions right.
Thanks
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p0tterfan
Sunday 19th December 2004 23:28 | I Will Be Waiting |
| Interesting 2nd chapter ... looking forward to the next.
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| Saturday 25th December 2004 04:11 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you like it. (and like the next chapter as much)
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Shadow Hider
Friday 17th December 2004 22:07 | I Will Be Waiting |
| oh wow... can't wait to read more... |
| Saturday 25th December 2004 04:10 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you like it.
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DADAGinny
Friday 17th December 2004 17:24 | I Will Be Waiting |
I was wondering when he would meet someone else. Interesting that its Percy.
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| Friday 17th December 2004 17:28 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| We find out what happens during that meeting in the next chapter.
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Pineapple Queen
Friday 17th December 2004 16:45 | I Will Be Waiting |
I love this story, especially the flashback Weasley moment. Great job!
*is waiting expectantly for next chapter*
-PQ |
| Friday 17th December 2004 17:12 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Glad you like it I've just got the chapter back from my pre-beta, so it shouldnt be long!
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ohboehm
Friday 17th December 2004 09:54 | I Will Be Waiting |
This is a delightful and very interesting story! I am glad that I happened upon it, and look forward to much future enjoyment as you develop your themes. Using the devices of The Five People You Meet in Heaven to give a "future backwards" account of our favorite characters' lives is a neat, and different, idea---it's the first such story that I have seen.
Thank you for your story, and keep up the good work! |
| Friday 17th December 2004 13:51 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thank-you! glad you're enjoying it, the next chapter should't be too long, and in it we step into the story proper...
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jabarber69
Thursday 16th December 2004 20:46 | I Will Be Waiting |
Okay, per your email to me, I told you then I would check this story out next time you updated. I have to admit you have my attention. this is starting to get really good, it is pretty obivious that you have quite the imagination and the abiltiy to tell a story and write that story.
Waiting for the next installment... |
| Friday 17th December 2004 13:48 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you have decided to stick around
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Iris
Thursday 16th December 2004 20:01 | I Will Be Waiting |
I love the young ron sections in this chapter. Seeing his interactions with his brothers was great.
Look forward to more
~Iris |
| Friday 17th December 2004 13:43 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
I like those too there will be more of them in each chapter.
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Allie Kiwi
Thursday 16th December 2004 19:34 | I Will Be Waiting |
This is my favourite chapter so far - I really like the scenes from the past, here; a lovely glimpse into the Weasley family life.
Also, I love your descriptive passages. They certainly give one a wonderful picture of what the setting is like (especially for people like me who don't have a 'mind's eye'). |
| Friday 17th December 2004 13:41 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Thanks, one thing about the place Ron is at the moment, is, it is drawn
from Ron's own memories, so hopefully that semi, rose-tinted, youthful
theme comes across, as he gets older, the strong memories will remain,
but will age with him.
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