daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 5th July 2006 17:22 | To Save a Life |
| Yes, a very stupid headache. And stupid Snape and Malfoy. Oh, and don't forget Voldemort. He is very stupid, and and using dementors. Jeezz. |
Gridley
Wednesday 5th January 2005 13:13 | To Save a Life |
I was more than a little confused as to who Malfoy was referring to (Percy being dead); it might have helped to introduce that before the fight, or make it more explicit.
However, otherwise this is an excellent chapter. |
| Tuesday 11th January 2005 00:23 | To Save a Life (Author Response) |
That's the trouble with writing a story with a lot of backstory the readers aren't familiar with. More than once I've been told Ginny's overreaction to Harry was very confusing for that same reason, that they weren't familiar with the past events the characters are referring to. That confusion aside, though, I didn't want to overload the story with seemingly irrelevant background information before it becomes important to the story. To talk about Percy's death earlier without either using omniscient perspective or inserting a long and boring "data dump", I would have had to make Harry think about it beforehand for some reason. I didn't do that because he's not likely to just start thinking about Percy at length until the subject is forced on him.
I appreciate your comments, however, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Next chapter things start to get really interesting . . . |
SiblingCreature
Saturday 25th December 2004 09:44 | To Save a Life |
I'm really liking this so far, and am looking forward to the next chapter.
I knew your name seemed familiar but it wasn't until I read the note on
this chapter that I realised where I know it from, that being
your notes to St Margarets on SIYE. :-)
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| Sunday 26th December 2004 15:40 | To Save a Life (Author Response) |
| I'm glad you like the story. Yes, St. Margarets is a good friend of mine, and an excellent author herself. |
Stormdelver
Thursday 23rd December 2004 16:34 | To Save a Life |
| As "not exactly where it goes"- I think I see where this is going- not a very well-liked path, but one that happens more often than not- You know the saying-better to love and lost than not at all? I don't agree with that. Tommy Lee Jones may have said it best with "Try it." |
Stormdelver
Thursday 23rd December 2004 16:31 | To Save a Life |
| Yes I would have to concur, men just don't understand the workings of the female mind...as perhaps it should be. But you are using that very well here, poor Harry- to love too late, its a very horrible feeling to find out who you want- only that they have went a different way. Tragic romance- its finding the one who makes you complete, even being very good, and long-time friends but the depth is never reciprocated. It feels like falling off a cliff- flying for a moment to shatter on the rocks below- every day. But I digress, very good second chapter- i see the touch of St. Margarets here- her stories are wonderful as well. Well done, I love the story- keep your muse comming> |
mary-v
Thursday 23rd December 2004 13:44 | To Save a Life |
This stroy is brilliant, and I love where it ssems to be headed! You write wonderously! Please update soon!
~Maria~ |
| Thursday 23rd December 2004 15:31 | To Save a Life (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Glad you liked it. Where it seems to be headed might not be exactly where it goes, though . . . :firedevil: |
Pugpal
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 23:56 | To Save a Life |
| AWESOME!!!! |
