hermione&ginny
Saturday 16th April 2011 07:58 | Defining Moments |
| This is so sad! But it is a great story! |
majolie
Sunday 4th January 2009 19:29 | Defining Moments |
| Wow - you were right about the lack of fluff in this chapter. I normally am not a big fan of angst, but it was very well written, plus it went hand-in-hand with the deepening relationships of our favorite characters. |
nickjgirl1
Tuesday 19th August 2008 16:51 | Defining Moments |
| this is so awesome!u know that weird feeling where u laugh cause u're nervous?well,i do that when i read your story. and r perfect 4 eachother! |
Snip
Saturday 14th July 2007 19:12 | Defining Moments |
Oh, so very well done. I can't imagine that was an easy chapter to write, but you made it so sweet and so believable. I still have tears in my eyes!
Thank you again for sharing your amazing writing talent with all of us die hard fans! |
Bryher
Monday 5th February 2007 14:28 | Defining Moments |
| That made me cry my eyes out! The attack seemed very abrupt - almost rushed, but the aftermath was very detailed and heartbreaking. Thanks (I think!) Hope the rest isn't quite as angsty. Thanks, Helen |
rupertgrintsgirl
Monday 8th January 2007 19:31 | Defining Moments |
sniffle~sniffle~
that was the most touching and most sadest thing I have ever read. And yet I loved it. good job! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 13th November 2006 16:04 | Defining Moments |
| Aww. That is too sad. And like Harry said, change isn't always for the worst. |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 20th September 2006 17:19 | Defining Moments |
Wow, that was pretty powerful. So sad for Hermione . Nice talk with Harry and Ginny and with Harry and Hermione. Ron was pretty good, too.
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hfleming8
Friday 23rd June 2006 08:31 | Defining Moments |
Guh. Guh. Guh.
That was sooooooo sad.
But so very good. I can so see Ron and Harry rallying around Hermione in her time of need/trouble.
Another kick hiney chapter, Gov.
~hez |
Concealed
Sunday 30th October 2005 18:19 | Defining Moments |
| Aw!!!!!!!! That was soooooooo sad!
When you said that they were going to go through a difficult time I
thought that their love would be tested, (as in they liked someone
else) it completely blew me away when that happened. It was a really
great chapter though! A few words weren't spelled correctly, but that's
not a big deal, just wanted to point that out. ^^ Great job!
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| Monday 31st October 2005 14:42 | Defining Moments (Author Response) |
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, despite it's rather depressing themes. It was my hope to show that the bond between them was strong and lasting
Thanks for reviewing! |
sonicdale
Sunday 15th May 2005 22:34 | Defining Moments |
Ouch. Hermione losing her parents. Ouch.
You dealt with her grief admirably. Good show.
I also like the fact that Harry reacted the way he did. That was very in character for him.
Can't wait to read more.
Hope to see some brighter spots ahead...
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SillyGillie
Thursday 3rd February 2005 19:37 | Defining Moments |
| Brilliant job! |
Estonian Chick
Friday 31st December 2004 08:28 | Defining Moments |
Beautiful and sad. I can't imagine what Hermione must be going through... I'm looking forward to more chapters! |
Robert Owen
Friday 31st December 2004 03:36 | Defining Moments |
| Very touching and well done. Tis truly a point at which the bonds of love are tested and tempered. |
| Monday 10th January 2005 16:22 | Defining Moments (Author Response) |
| Thank you! It's always wonderful to get such postive feedback from a fellow author! |
juliet
Friday 31st December 2004 01:03 | Defining Moments |
Beautiful...thankyou
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Arnel
Friday 31st December 2004 00:31 | Defining Moments |
After reading this chapter, I'm fully hooked on this story! It is now on my list of must-read fics as soon as you post the next chapter! Below, I've listed my favorite lines, although the more I read, the more I realized that I can't quote the entire chapter!
1. "No," he replied. "I've never had the chance. Certainly not in the way you're talking about." Such classic Harry! You really have an insight into his emotions and psyche.
2. "Now is not the time, Harry," Dumbledore spoke so only Harry could hear. "There will be a time when all debts are paid: for the Grangers, for Sirius, for your parents. Right now, Hermione needs a friend, not an Angel of Vengeance." Harry lowered his wand. "You will want to blame yourself, but don't Harry. Hermione would have been a target even if you went to Durmstang. She was at risk simply by being Muggle-born." Your Dumbledore is so wise! He knows just what to say and how to say it.
3. I'm going to spend the rest of my life trying to make this woman happy again, and I will, even if it takes me the rest of my life, Ron promised himself. Oh, he gets it! He's growing wiser and showing the courage and determination that originally made him a Gryffindor!
4. Harry needs to learn some patience, Ron thought. That's why he's so bad a chess. He can't wait for things to develop slowly. Wow! Ron really knows Harry! This is the best insight into Harry's head that I've ever read.
I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I hope it gets posted soon. A. |
| Monday 10th January 2005 16:19 | Defining Moments (Author Response) |
| Thank you for the humbling review! I really enjoy working with the characters and it pleases me to think that I've really struck a chord! Thanks a bunch! |
Tamar73
Friday 31st December 2004 00:29 | Defining Moments |
Wow...powerful material, handled with grace and style. I look forward to the coming chapters with great anticipation. |
BeckiSoup
Friday 31st December 2004 00:28 | Defining Moments |
Hi Ugly Brother!
I like what you did with this chapter! It's come a long way from the early version I read a month ago!
I'm proud of you!
Give me more! NOW!
Love always,
Sistwerp |
Pugpal
Thursday 30th December 2004 23:38 | Defining Moments |
| oh, poor Hermione! that is truly awful! glad Ron, Harry and Ginny are there! |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Thursday 30th December 2004 23:15 | Defining Moments |
| This was sad, but really well done. Looking forward to more... |
