critmo
Monday 12th December 2005 03:07 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| I don't quite understand why Harry doesn't write back. |
harry'sgurl
Friday 10th June 2005 11:29 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| Awesome chapter |
kensai
Sunday 15th May 2005 17:40 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| The chap is not action filled, but the imagery is magic. |
Genevieve
Friday 21st January 2005 00:34 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
Yay! I like this so far, and I'm so relieved to hear you don't
want this to be the typical year fic of romance and adventure.
I'm also rather intrigued by how you've got Ron maturing. Few
people seem to want to do that. Thank Merlin someone in fandom will do it!
I think this chapter's exposition could have been cut down (I know you
A/N'ed about it) if you just didn't recap so much. It's
unnecessary, because if someone's reading this fic, they've probably
read OotP and know. Just light recapping. Otherwise, the
exposition over the summer was good.
Keep it up,
Emily
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| Sunday 23rd January 2005 15:28 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
Ron's maturing has been difficult to write, and there'll be times that he'll be as immature as he's ever been, but rest assured that his newfound 'age' will have its plus side, as well, although it'll be a hard-fought battle to find it
Thanks for reviewing. |
Maximaleeni
Friday 7th January 2005 14:04 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
I just posted a review for Chapter 1 on the Prologue bit... You can tell I'm new to this.
Sorry! |
Curt
Tuesday 4th January 2005 16:49 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
This is a review for the prolouge and chapter one.
I think this story is off to a really great start, and also I feel that chapter one was in no way dull.
I really like how you portrayed the Dursley's in this story, and I am
interested in what will happen. I am also very curious in how you
described this as a story not usual for this website.
I'm willing to bet that this becomes a very popular fan-fiction. Please keep writing.
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| Sunday 9th January 2005 14:03 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
The story's unusual in that the characters will be exploring their hormones without jumping straight into the relationships that are typical for this site I've written a lot of fics where H/G and R/Hr happen to the exclusion of other possibilities, but with this one I decided to experiment a little. I don't think that my way is better, though. Just different. I love fics where the relationships are simple as much as I love stories where the relationships are as complicated as I might end up making them...
I'm glad that you've enjoyed the story so far, and I hope you're right about it becoming a popular one here at Phoenix Song |
thehopefulGinnyPotter
Monday 3rd January 2005 11:18 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| Oooh, I am intrigued. I didn't think this chapter was boring at all. I thought it was very interesting. Hope you update soon! |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:16 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Glad you enjoyed it I'm aiming to get a new chapter online every ten days or so, but we'll have to see how it goes. |
Neely61
Monday 3rd January 2005 09:04 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| Very interesting chapter. I like the you're making Harry think about things. The Dursleys being nice? <shudder> Wonder what ther're up to? At the end of last chapter Molly tells Ginny that Harry wants to go to Grimauld but at the end of this one Harry just wants to get to London so he he can go see Remus at St. Mungos. Anyway, Great so far and can't wait for more! |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:16 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Harry hasn't thought things through all the way - sound familiar? - but to go to St. Mungo's, he'll have to pass through Grimmauld Place. Molly and McGonagall know where he has to go, though, and both will be there to welcome him. You'll see how Harry deals with that next chapter, and it's not in the calm and ordered way that he probably should... |
Melindaleo
Sunday 2nd January 2005 21:43 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
Hello Majick! Long time, no "see"! It did start a bit slow, but loads of potential. Your version of the Dursleys cracked me up. I love the image of Vernon Dursley walking around shouting at kitchen appliances.
Oh, no that Remus is hurt. Poor Harry, not another one so soon. I'll be watching for the next one. |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:14 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Of all the characters available in the Potterverse, Remus is one of the very few I consider untouchable. He'll pick up a few knocks along the way, but I don't think I could ever kill him. Like Ron, I see too much of myself in him to do that to him. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 2nd January 2005 19:34 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
Awesome chapter! It was really interesting to see Harry's side of everything. I'm glad that he can talk to Remus every night, but he should talk to Remus about Sirius' death, so that way both of them can heal. Harry should realize that the chapter in JK's book was called "Snape's Worst Memory" because it was indeed Snape's worst memory, all the other things James and Sirius did to Snape weren't that bad because this one was the worst. Excellent job! I do hope that Remus is alright, hopefully he'll be fine. The Dursley's were kind of acting strange, lol. I can't wait for more! Post some more soon! |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:12 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Harry will deal with the Pensieve memory in due time. As for talking to Remus about Sirius, at this point their grief is too raw to be able to cope with it. Over the school year, both should make inroads in coming to terms with Sirius' death, so that conversation should take place eventually. |
jedicren
Sunday 2nd January 2005 14:53 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| Good start. Yes, the first chapter was a little boring, but you picked it up pretty quickly. I like how the Dursleys were trying to be nice to Harry. |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:10 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Hopefully not too much of the rest of the story will be boring Thanks for the review! |
Mara Angel
Sunday 2nd January 2005 14:30 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
Hi!
Good story! Please keep up! Il like it when they are canon.
What happened to Remus? |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 17:58 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
| Remus has been injured on a mission for the Order. You'll find out how badly in the next chapter. I'll try and keep the characters as close to canon as possible; I prefer it that way too. |
lizzyrose89
Sunday 2nd January 2005 13:11 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
| Excellent story so far! Keep updating! |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 18:02 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
The next update should be in the next ten days or so. Thanks for the review!
(Sorry if you get several e-mails. I'm still trying to work this system out...) |
Sherbert
Sunday 2nd January 2005 13:07 | The Knights of Walpurgis |
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Mr Dursley being nice to Harry - what is the world coming to. And more to the point what had happened that day to make it start. Like the way you've captured Harry emotions during this piece - and the way he trys to avoid them. Also the confusion he feels about certain issues such as his Dad. Hope the next chapter is ready soon. |
| Monday 3rd January 2005 17:52 | The Knights of Walpurgis (Author Response) |
The Dursleys are just scared of Mad-Eye, and with Harry looking glummer than ever, Uncle Vernon just went off the deep end |
