Gin-erva
Thursday 10th February 2011 18:13 | With All My Love |
| Oooh... poor Remus. I hope he does find a girl, he certainly deserves one. He would hate my pity though... |
haileythefan
Monday 24th September 2007 20:30 | With All My Love |
| I've juat finished chapter 12 and all I have to say I knew it you were going to make Remus be in love with Lily |
Patches
Sunday 29th April 2007 16:48 | With All My Love |
| Ah, poor Remus. He had a really rough time and then confessed his feelings for Lily to her. That was rough. I hope he gets to feeling better about this whole thing. Thanks for writing. I really am enjoying this story. p |
Wooster
Sunday 18th June 2006 16:56 | With All My Love |
| Aw!!!!!!!!!! *Cries bitterly for poor Remus Lupin* It really hit me in this chapter how he's just a teenager. I always think of him as the careworn adult but in this chapter it really hit me and I felt so bad for the sweetheart. |
May
Sunday 3rd April 2005 22:07 | With All My Love |
| this story came highly recommed and i must say it lived up to the hype. i am happy to see a lot of lupin in this story too. i am a big lupin fan and i also thought there might me a little bit more to his realtionship with lily. i think its only natural and you did a wonderful job writing it. i hope you update soon you have me hooked. |
moonelf
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 13:28 | With All My Love |
hey im new to the site but i love all ur stories i think there really good and very touching i really like the way you write your stories there really different. please hurry up with the next chapter Moonelf xxx |
LadyGriff
Thursday 20th January 2005 16:23 | With All My Love |
| I am really enjoying your story. There are so few stories about this group and it is a nice change. |
TigerLily8186
Monday 10th January 2005 20:44 | With All My Love |
Great dialogue. As I've been told, dialogue is what can really tell things about your characters, but it can be one of the hardest things to write and seem real and convincing. I think you did a wonderful job. Your Remus is shaping up to be the complex individual we all know he is.
I am also curious as to how some bits might not be canonically true, that bit of your A/N interested me quite a lot. ~Megs |
Miss Effie
Monday 10th January 2005 19:45 | With All My Love |
That was amazing. I just sat down and read the your entire fanfic (and, what with semester tests coming up, reading for long periods of time is something I have to watch out for). (So, if I get a bad grade on my tests, I'll know who to blame!) ~_^ No, but that was amazing. You expressed Remus' feelings with such...gracefulness and flow...I dunno if I can explain it. It was just marvy but also very, very sad. It was interesting to read all that you have done in one sitting, because I really could see how you progressed as a writer, got more comfortable with the characters, and began showing off your wonderful writing skill a lot more. I really don't mean to sound patronizing, but that's just what I felt. I love Lily/James fics, and have read a lot of them, but a very select few contain that...certain quality that yours has. Sorry I can't be more coherent. But, please, update soon and make my day! ^_^ |
lovesprungfromhate
Monday 10th January 2005 10:14 | With All My Love |
fantastic! as always.
i love this story, and i can't wait to get some more of it... loooking eargerly towards the update list for your name...
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