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Reviews For This Is Us by Bart

Cirquedufreakfan
Friday 10th December 2010 09:14
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I loved this story but there was a total lack of snogging :{)
pyromain
Thursday 21st June 2007 17:02
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a real lovelly story of slow respectable love.
lacyrachil
Wednesday 6th December 2006 08:46
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Perfect. I quite enjoyed the "realism" of the story. Thanks for writing.
Wednesday 6th December 2006 10:59This Is Us (Author Response)
Thank you for reviewing!
Novera
Saturday 24th June 2006 16:52
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why BLODDY hell are you saying sorry
I LOVE it
levotatingT
Tuesday 14th June 2005 20:27
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That was so so so cute.  I loved how Harry stopped Ginny from him, it really meant something and it made the story different from the others

great job, keep writing, and Plez write back

levotatingT

Friday 17th June 2005 11:40This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it, completly chuffed you liked and 'got' why I didn't have them kiss, I was worried that the 'snog-happy' set would hate it just because it didn't have one.

You can be assured though, that they both soon make up for it  
DADAGinny
Monday 13th June 2005 11:20
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Love how close Ginny and Harry are in this one before they are actually "together".  I've had a lot of male friends, and I can completely identify with that closeness (that does turn into love for the right person, like a certain Jedi...)


Monday 13th June 2005 14:05This Is Us (Author Response)


Yup, & have been "together" much longer than they believe
roxypoxy
Sunday 30th January 2005 19:39
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very nice and mushy, though i got confused at the start , cos i thought they were more than friends .
Monday 31st January 2005 03:52This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, glad you liked it, don't be too worried about being confused though, at the start of the story, they are very much 'more than freinds' but have yet to admit it to themselves or each other.
tante
Thursday 27th January 2005 21:57
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You know, one of the things I truly liked about this story was all the feeling you packed into it, without relying on kissing.  We have a tendency, I think, to trivialize physical intimacy by making it too common place.  I'll admit, I first thought, "What's the big deal, it's just a kiss.  Why wait?"  But my brain quickly moved on to the possibility that that thought was indeed the problem.  Well done.  Set yourself more challenges.  I'm interested to read more of them.  
Friday 28th January 2005 12:08This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, glad you liked it, one of the conventions og HP fluff seems to be 'the kiss' I thought it would be more interesting to concentrate on the emotions and feelings, so I'm happy that they came across,
Delani
Thursday 27th January 2005 21:46
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Quite fantabulous! I'm sure that is my oversued word of the century, but it's true! This story is great! And I enjoyed your snog-less challenge; makes the story one out of 3.6 billion other ficlets on the web.   Well done!

Delani

Friday 28th January 2005 12:05This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, glad you liked it 
mary-v
Thursday 27th January 2005 17:31
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This is the one of the rare fics - that doesn't have them kiss- that was actually well done. So many others that I have read simply don't live up to what I expect. But this, this *sigh. It was perfect. I really enjoyed reading it, and I hope to read more soon! VERY soon!

~Maria~

Friday 28th January 2005 12:04This Is Us (Author Response)
Wow, thank-you very much  glad you liked it!
critmo
Thursday 27th January 2005 07:29
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It's a good story, but I don't quite understand what they're waiting for.
Thursday 27th January 2005 14:11This Is Us (Author Response)
It's a good story, but I don't quite understand what they're waiting for.
First, off I'm glad you enjoyed the story. As for why they are waiting... Well they've been good freinds for a while, by the time this story takes place, and they have just confessed their feelings for each other and they want to bask in that moment for a while, besides they haven't even been on a 'date' yet, and Harry's a gentleman and isn't the type to expect a snog on the first date, never mind before it.

As, Harry said, it's something to look forward to
juliet
Thursday 27th January 2005 03:06
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Too much Kokopelli hey?  Well if that means I get to read a well written story, with great character development, then it isn't really a bad thing.  And they are better off not kissing anyway, they may just end up chipping a tooth or something!

Thursday 27th January 2005 14:05This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, glad you like it 
Allie Kiwi
Thursday 27th January 2005 01:25
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I absolutely loved reading this story, especially where Harry fumbles for what to say and ends up rambling on and on.  I hope someone writes him a speech for after he bumps off Voldemort, because impressive speaker he is not.  Poor boy.  But at least he has Ginny on his side now. 

As always, I think you use brilliant descriptions to set the scene.

Ah, the commas.  Just imagine a darlek after them - 'exterminate, exterminate!'

Allie

Thursday 27th January 2005 14:14This Is Us (Author Response)
Thanks, Allie, I, personally, don't, see, anything, wrong, with, my, use, of, commas, but, hey, each, to his/her, own! 

Seriously, I'm cuffed you like it so much!