gymnastgal19
Tuesday 25th March 2008 00:19 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
aw! thats so cute!
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cckeimig
Friday 21st October 2005 21:00 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
| Cute. Very sweet ending after a very frustrating time for poor Ronniekins. |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Friday 2nd September 2005 20:37 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
o.o...not bad.not bad at all
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Sarcasmo
Thursday 30th June 2005 08:58 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
Sarcasmo here.... Just would like to apologize for the last review as it seemed to have offended you, though its intent was to invite you as I think you're a good writer.
Now that that's done, I still wanted to leave a review on this piece because I did enjoy it very much. Like I think I said before, I don't see Harry borrowing a 'good shirt' from Ron, as everything Ron has is second hand and I'm sure by this point Harry has a couple good things of his own to wear.
I really like Ron's overprotectiveness and the snide comment said concerning Micheal Corner. Very funny! (Then again, I'm a sap for Overprotective!Ron).
Keep writing!
~Sarcasmo |
KingBumbler
Friday 4th February 2005 19:06 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
| Well done! I'd pick this fic any day of the week and Sundays to boot.
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lissabee
Tuesday 1st February 2005 21:41 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
| Wow, this was very original and quite sweet. |
Pooca
Sunday 30th January 2005 12:04 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
| Very cute! I love the finger-holding in the end. Ron and Ginny's interaction was excellent! |
Delani
Saturday 29th January 2005 08:21 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
Ok, wait, I have to find a better smiley...
There! Now that portrays just how much I loved this entry! I don't know what all the required phrases are, but after reading this, I still don't know. Everything, from the plot to the dialogue (and that adorbale small smile of Hermione's) was so natural! Though the holiday wasn't, this story was flawless! Your pen name is hidden, but I know I like your work already. This really is great!
Delani |
| Saturday 29th January 2005 13:34 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever (Author Response) |
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XiaoXiao
Saturday 29th January 2005 00:50 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
| Very sweet. You did a great job incorporating the canon events into your own story--or vice versa, really. |
Jedione
Friday 28th January 2005 10:43 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
Very nice POV change, and good story.
Thanks |
Jaquelyne
Friday 28th January 2005 06:20 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
It's not often I find a "missing moment" I like, but this was great. I loved Ron trying to deal with his dismal performance and realizing that Hermione would be alone for Valentine's Day in Hogsmeade. It was very in canon for OotP! Ron.
The end of the day was sweet and fit into what we know about Ron and Hermione. There is so much speculation about their relationship in the second half of the book that I could see a moment like this one being the beginning of them finally doing something about their feelings.
Well Done!
~J~ |
St Margarets
Friday 28th January 2005 03:00 | The Worst Valentine's Day Ever |
That was an interesting slice of OotP! Ron was very well done and I liked the limberger line with the smelly robes.
I'm glad Hermione had the time to buy Ron something after her meeting with Rita Skeeter and Luna! The thing with the little fingers was cute and not over the top for an OotP fic. Good job! |
