"I only went with Neville and Jeanne because Neville was afraid of Jeanne's chest and Jeanne was afraid that Neville only liked her for her chest!"

I don't usually like first person narration, and I usually don't like multiple POV's.  But you definitely proved me wrong here!  Wow!  This was cute and funny.  I liked the way you ended it too.  It gave it closure from a mature perspective!

Well written!

That was sooo good! Definitely one of the fluffiest fics I've ever read, and I mean that as a very high compliment. Funny, cute,qitty, quirky, and the ending was perfect.
Favorite quotes:

<<That is when I realized that we were all prats. A regular prat brigade.>>

<<So Jeanne, Neville and I, along with Jeanne's chest, went to Hogsmeade on Friday night.>>

Great story!
Bella

OMG. that is so, so, so cute.  I can definitly see why it won.  I loved the whole story.  Awsome

great job, keep writing, and PLez write back

levotatingT

I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  It was fun to write pure fluff for H/G without all that other stuff Harry has to worry about! You can get away with it in a one-shot!  Thanks for reading!

That was so cute and funny.  I've had a St. Margarets marathon today.  I've read the last three or four stories off this site that I hadn't read yet in almost one sitting.  Excellent as usual.  You are so good at both one shots and chaptered stories.  I can't wait to read more in the future.

Very nice short fic. I enjoyed this, and the twist at the end is quite a nice touch. Good job!

Vern

Hooray!  That clunking noise in the background was the romance meter ... and those replacement parts straight from the factory are SO hard to come by these days.

On a slightly less goofy note, I was going to say that you seem to have a frightening degree of intuition into the adolescent male psyche, but reading through your review responses, I now see why.  The prat brigade indeed ...

Nicely, nicely done. 

I love how you write, regardless of  point of view.  I'm sorry I don't review your work more often -- but I'm always excited when I see the name St. Margarets attached to a title.

Favorite quotes:  "That is when I realized that we were all prats. A regular prat brigade."

"Did I mention that as part of my third-year-girl-in-love-with-a-bass-player persona, I had memorized Ginny's schedule?"

Great work as always.

Whooppee! Congratulations!

I also had a sneaking suspicion it might be you but voted for Feb. 15th because I thought it was a great story whoever the author was.

clare

Ha! I knew the writing style was familiar! I actually did sort of guess it might be you, but didn;t want to say anything for fear of embarassement!  Actually I voted for you! Well, congratulations on your win!

~Maria~

Woohoo!  I guessed correctly that this was your fic, St. M!  But then, the only reason I guessed it was you was because I recognized Jeanne from Red Is The Heart, so I suppose I'm not entitled to feel too smug. 

Like many of your other reviewers, I really loved the way you moved between Harry's and Ginny's pov -- it was very smooth and fluid, and very clever of you to use the same lines to connect them.  Your Harry was even more endearing than usual -- no wonder Ginny loves him!  And the part about Ginny going to Hogsmeade with Neville, Jeanne, and Jeanne's chest was just too funny.

Congratulations on your win!

Pennylane, you cracked the code!  I'm afraid I'm not very stealth after all - one person pointed out that I reviewed everyone but myself - yet another give away.  Good thing I don't plan a life of crime! LOL.  Thanks for your review!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Congratulations! A wonderful treat for Valentine's Day!

Since I was a high school teacher for ten years, I had lots of interaction with teenagers!  Plus I remember those delightful days of my own life all too well! Thanks for your review.

Yay! So cute. Well done.

J

Ahh, how I love a Post-Hogwarts tale. I liked the style you had going with repeating the same line into each transitioning POV. And the use of luscious,  (...her toes, lol)  A few moments seemed a bit awkward in the dialogue, but I really was pleased with the overall story! The surprise ending definetely added to the intrigue.

Delani

I absolutely loved this! you did an excellent job with this! I loved every single part, and the idea of them being married and writing a letter to their daughter was an amazing idea! Other than a few minor typos, you did a brilliant job!

~Maria~

Very Very nice

I really enjoyed every part of the story.  The one-liners and especially the third-year-girl persona bits.

Bravo!

Oh, bravo!  This is probably my favourite to win so far.  It's very funny, very fluffy, and has just the right sprinkling of angst.  Great job!

I'm glad you liked the story and I wondered if you knew it was me!  Thanks for your review - it's always good to hear from you.

Totally excellent!

The story already had enough clever twists and turns and then you zap us with the end. Great fun and very  nicely handled internal dialogue. Loved Ginny going to Hogsmead with Jeanne, Neville and Jeanne's chest.

clare

This story is brilliant. The one-liners are funny. The confusion of both Harry and Ginny humorous. But as it should be they get it right in the end.

Just marvellous. I really think you've done a great job in capturing the moods of teenage boys - and, in Jeanne, the insecurity of the maturing teenage girl - in this piece. Dean's complete ignorance of Ginny, Neville and Jeanne is typical of the males of this age, and it's a nice change for someone other than Harry to be that clueless.

For his part, Harry is great in this story. He gets up the courage to ask Ginny out, and has the sense to go to Hogsmeade even though she has to turn him down. A (re)union in the forest between the two makes a nice change form the fireplace or the Quidditch changing rooms.

I also love the way you've worked your chosen phrases into the story as well. They don't seem forced and in at least two of the three cases I'd read past them before clocking them, whereas in many such challenges the story builds up to the phrases before ebbing away again. It was nice to see Seamus and Dean get some significant screen time as a result of their lines, too...

Between Harry's protectiveness and Ginny's honesty I love it when she says 'I only fit the last part, I'm afraid' - you've given your characters some real depth in the short time available. All in all, an excellent piece.

Wonderful!  That was sinply excellent.  Both points of view and a peak into the future.

Great Job!

Harry is so clear about this since he is looking from a considerable distance of time.   That seemed to be the only way to write something like this and have the teen protagonists as aware of their feelings and motivations as they were in this story.  It was fun to write.  Thanks for your review!

This was a nice feel good bit of fluff for an achy day.  You do internal dialogue well.  Bravo,  or brava?  since I don't know who I'm reviewing.