meandyou2
Saturday 13th December 2008 13:27 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
It's just me the devils advocate again.
"The Fidelius Charm had failed again, just like it had for his parents. There always seemed to be someone ready to betray them."
Heres the problem. I know this is AU, however since you never said otherwise we know that bog D is the secret keeper so the quote above means that Dumbldore is a trader because no one else can give the location away and you cannot get it from their mind?????
The biggest issue I had with JK and one that you seem to be following is the lack of reality of war. Even the guy with the heart of gold kills in war. They don't like to do it , but they DO without hesitation and they live with it because survival is simply who pulls the trigger first. |
Patches
Sunday 15th July 2007 19:47 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Wow, that was a tough return to school. I really like this story so far and i look forward to more. Thanks for writing. p |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 20th October 2006 12:45 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
I like the lists (not just in this chapter; the other story, too).
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daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 23rd June 2006 22:40 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Harry is finally starting to fall for Ginny. Thank god. I mean, it took him a while. Jeeez. -lol- |
Muggle Witch
Monday 2nd May 2005 10:15 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Each chapter gets better, and better. The to do list was bitter sweet. Well done! |
Sassenach
Sunday 10th April 2005 09:58 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Wait a minute! I have a question....Was Harry abused, molested, or even raped while he was at Malfoy Manor? I'm just so confused, because the description was that he had only lost his shirt during that time. Hmmm anyway, I'd really like to know because now you have my curiosity piqued! |
Kelleypen
Monday 14th February 2005 09:15 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Yes. Go Harry and Ginny! Keep thinking that way Harry. |
Wild Magelet
Sunday 13th February 2005 21:09 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Great chapter! =) Love Harry's lists - I think that's pretty much his plan in canon too. And I especially like the inclusion of how he's always unconsciously watching Ginny, because he does. It's one of the main reasons it'll be so bizarre if JKR doesn't go the H/G way. He's always noticing things about her - hair, eyes, walking away. Anyway, I thought a lot of elements rang true to canon, so great job. =) |
| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 09:50 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Great chapter! =) Love Harry's lists - I think that's pretty much his plan in canon too. And I especially like the inclusion of how he's always unconsciously watching Ginny, because he does. It's one of the main reasons it'll be so bizarre if JKR doesn't go the H/G way. He's always noticing things about her - hair, eyes, walking away. Anyway, I thought a lot of elements rang true to canon, so great job. =)
Thanks!
Yes, I absolute agree. If JKR doesn't go H/G, I'll be gobsmacked! Harry does notice her, and in positive ways, too. I think as soon as he gets interested in girls at all (read: when his hormones kick in) then Ginny will be the one, the only one who can give him as much support as he needs, as much of a tongue-lashing as he sometimes needs, as much protection as he needs and as much empathy as he needs. No one else could handle him, honestly!
Ash
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Melindaleo
Sunday 13th February 2005 17:47 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Woo Hoo, Ash. It is so wonderful to see you back here! I loved the part where Ginny caught on to his trying not to look at her and gave him a hard time. That was so perfect. The idea of noticing her more when trying not to notice her was a hoot too. So true, I could easily relate it to real life.
Too things I want to change about Harry's list. I'd like to Ginny's name specifically under the girl part. Prat.
And also, to move SURVIVE to the top of his list. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Sunday 13th February 2005 16:10 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Great chapter! Looking forward to the 'Kiss a Girl on purpose' being moved to #1 on the list. Perhaps even revised to be 'Kiss Ginny'.
Cheers! |
| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 09:56 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Great chapter! Looking forward to the 'Kiss a Girl on purpose' being moved to #1 on the list. Perhaps even revised to be 'Kiss Ginny'.
Cheers!
Ahhhhh . . . very, very true. That very event will be forthcoming. Promise! Thanks for the review!
Ash
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arios
Sunday 13th February 2005 13:15 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| I always like Harry's "to do lists" Wonder who's going to be the recipient of the first kiss?? A certain redhead? wink wink! |
| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 09:57 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Let's see . . . Harry's to-do list will be changing slightly as he goes throughout the year, and that "Kiss a girl" will be getting more specific! That's all I'm saying about that!
Ash |
