Gees, I wasn't ready for an ending. (I was kind of hoping  for another 30 chapters. I appoligise for my greed, but you wrote a wonderful start.)

Thank you for posting and sharing your work.

What a great story!!!!!

I was thrilled, amazed and on the edge of my seat during the fighting scenes. What a way to show how us Muggles can really fight with proper training and something those stupid Death Eaters don't know anything about.

BRAVO!!!!!!

Excellent story; if I have any complaint, it's that it's too short!  This would make a great jumping off point for a much longer work, perhaps one where the skills of the parents of other Muggleborn students are brought into play against Voldemort's forces.  I hope you have more stories planned in this version of the Potterverse, I think it's definitely a worthwhile addition to the vast collection of fan fiction that is scattered across the net.  Well done, and thanks for sharing it with us.

Hmm. The Mac-10 I don't buy. A double-barrel shotgun was actually what I was expecting (buckshot is a wonderful home defense round), and easier to obtain given the British obsession with birding.

Other than that, a great story, complete with The Boy Who Survives An Impossible Situation Once Per Book. :-)

Cool!!  I really like the concept of DE meeting thier match with a pair of muggles.  And it was really well written...  A definite plus... Especially since having a good idea so rarly translates to being a a good writer.  I also really liked the backstory about Herm's parents, though the scene with the inspector was a little confusing...  Keep up the good work...

Angelmorph

 doesn't know the Sergeant Major---what he said was that he met Inspector Fairbarin (who invented the knife Steph Granger carried)---Fairbarin is a legend in knife fighting circles---See volume 1 of WEB Griffith's Marine Corps series to see what another character does with a baby Fairbarin against a bunch of Italian marines in Shanghai...

 

 

Oh thank you for having  show up.  I have to admit, though, I'm a bit surprised Alastor knows the old Sergeant-Major/Inspector.  I'll betcha THAT would be a story worth reading (who said Dumbledore and his Animagi had the lock on 40s-era fun?).

Very nicely done.  I thought Steph's breaking the wand of the DE he'd killed -- just to make sure -- was very much in character.  These chapters hang together very well, and I think you've put your finger on one of the logical weaknesses of JKR's vision.  Her separation between magical and mundane is a bit too complete.  We're so often caught up in how wonderful her magical world is that we forget to wonder why there's less cooperation between the Ministry and the Muggle Government.

Anyway, I really enjoyed your tale, and the chance to see a side of Hermione's parents that we'd never suspect was there.  Poor Ron.  As if Hermione wasn't formidible enough.

more more more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and i mean that 

really you should continue this story its great and id love to read more on the sas

hogtie that muse and handcuff her to your wrist if you have to

Okay, this kids are finally asleep so I can leave a longer review.

Great progression with the chapter headings.

the Muggle explosive device went off five minutes after it should have
-DEs use bombs?  How Muggle!  No wonder they mucked up the timer.

Clayton assumed the formal stance.....irecting the precise assault spells he used so fondly.  When he looked back up, he noticed his target was closer than he expected him to be.
-Practice hero.

He dropped the body and reach down for the wand, snapping it in his hands. No wand, no wand spells.
-Thorough and well in character

and every one in the SAS knew about Steph Granger.
-sounds like a good fic in itself.  Any chance?

 includin' me in '42."
-Nice tie-in from the first chapter.

but she had been trained in defense by Harry Potter
-nothing more flattering than the respect of a hated enemy

an idea from the one year of Muggle Studies the lad had told no one of - had brought the young witch into easy range.
-Hah!  That was great.

Sylvia took Pew's wand, broke it, and stabbed him with the sharpest end.
-but that was better.

Sylvia had a bit of toothpaste on one side of her mouth, but the bloodstains distracted the viewer from that fact
-There are some wonderful scenes here.  Wish I could draw.

Get this bus headed to you-know-where, Ernie.
-Ernie's in the Order?  Makes sense I suppose.

That was a hoot to read!

Excellent!  Finally a fic where well-trained Muggles take out Death Eaters.  Hope you figure out a way to keep the Grangers about in another fic.

This story was far too much fun.  I've always been speculating about how Death Eaters would handle some good ol' special forces nastiness.  Good job.

Hi,

Cheers on adding some colour to why Hermione is a Gryffindor rather than a Ravenclaw. I also love the whole tone to Harry's scenes. Harry's desperation and hell-or-high-water sense of dedication to helping and protecting his friends shone through.

I hope you write more in this series. I was so anxiously awaiting the climax of your tail that I popped back to the site more times this week than any other time.

Keep on typing!

Mary