kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 11:15 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Well that's thrown the cat amongst the pigdeons!!! |
TangoCharlie
Friday 3rd October 2008 08:12 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Well, I was so wrapped up in the excitement of Harry getting to see his mother it didn't even occur to me that they might find Harry and Ginny a bit suspicious, so it was all a bit exciting from there. This is a very clever story - the details seem to be well covered. I liked yur description of the effects of Veritaserum, and from the limited glimpse we've seen at this point, I like how well you've captured DUmbledore's character. I wonder what he could have said to make Lily and James trust Harry and Ginny... |
Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 08:54 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Well at least they weren't sent to an Asylum.
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th March 2008 15:09 | A Wrinkle in Time |
welll im glad that james lilly and sirius arent stupid and take things at face value... and it was smart that ginny asked that only proffessor dumbledore is present for the questioning...
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daniel_r_crazy22
Wednesday 31st May 2006 18:35 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| O.K. What happened to Ginny's foot? And what a way to see his parents for the first real time. |
Gnome
Tuesday 8th March 2005 03:34 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| i really love your story ideas. the bargain was real good and so is this! rock on!
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lil steph
Thursday 3rd March 2005 18:39 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| awsome! |
lil steph
Tuesday 1st March 2005 15:37 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| awsome story so far!!!!! |
saugart
Friday 25th February 2005 09:15 | A Wrinkle in Time |
sonicdale wrote:
Oh, this is a nice story.
Amen to that!
Ginny said this stone was to "help defeat Voldemort." And
then Harry goes back in time to visit his parents? How does that defeat
him? Dumbledore cautioned about 'keeping the timeline intact.' Either
you're being sneaky and not letting on to how Harry is going to use the
stone against Voldemort, or he decided on a fluffy wish. I hope we get
to that soon.
My understanding is that Voldemort would want to tinker with the
timeline (tinker with it? Heck, massively modify it!) if he got
his hands on the stone. By using it up in a harmless fluffy wish,
Harry and Ginny deny him the use of it, but avoid doing any damage
themselves.
I also liked the punkers on the bus. Observations of 1980s
London and what is different might have been fun, but the mohawk guy
was fun.
It's interesting to see the difference. The people who dressed
all punked out in the USA, where I'm from, were generally harmless
music fans. Apparently the ones in London were actually
menacing. Wow.
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sonicdale
Thursday 24th February 2005 10:26 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Oh, this is a nice story.
I'm just wondering a few things.
Ginny said this stone was to "help defeat Voldemort." And then Harry goes back in time to visit his parents? How does that defeat him? Dumbledore cautioned about 'keeping the timeline intact.' Either you're being sneaky and not letting on to how Harry is going to use the stone against Voldemort, or he decided on a fluffy wish. I hope we get to that soon.
The bit with Lilly was done very nice. And that we're seeing Remus and Sirus younger was cool - maybe some description of how different 15 years makes. And that Lily has a bit of Irish in her? Nice touch. Explains the red hair.
I also liked the punkers on the bus. Observations of 1980s London and what is different might have been fun, but the mohawk guy was fun.
In all, a good read. Maybe some Quidditch? Harry vs. his Dad, ala "Field of Dreams"?
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| Friday 25th February 2005 16:53 | A Wrinkle in Time (Author Response) |
| Hmm. How to answer that question... There's a couple of
ways that using the wishing stone will help defeat Voldemort.
First, by using it, they deny allowing Voldemort to do so.
Second, they are letting Harry meet his parents, strengthening his
resolve to fight the Dark Lord and third...well, let's just say that
having a girl to come home to after a war is always a powerful
motivation.
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dophingirl79
Thursday 24th February 2005 09:52 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| It's been a while since I have seen this story updated. It is very good. I can't wait to read more Keep up the great work! |
SiblingCreature
Thursday 24th February 2005 09:21 | A Wrinkle in Time |
You know, rereading this fic on this site is somewhat
frustrating... I get to the end and find myself irritated because
I can't click to the next chapter... *wry smile*
*wanders off to reread the rest on ff.net*
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mary-v
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 18:03 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Excellent chapter- although it took quite a while for you to update... This was absolutely amazing! I can;t wait for the update... how long will this story be?
~Maria~ |
Kelleypen
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 17:25 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Yeah, mom hugs! Now, how will they get to know Lily and James without revealing anything? And won't they about go crazy not being able to warn them about Peter? |
Kundun
Wednesday 23rd February 2005 17:20 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| i love this story. please please please update like whoa!! |
