kash2210
Friday 17th October 2008 11:32 | A Wrinkle in Time |
I know that Harry doesn't want to change the timeline but I no sure if I were him, I'd be able to keep my mouth shut!!!
Another good chapter! |
TangoCharlie
Friday 3rd October 2008 08:25 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Wow! After a chapter filled with really nice moments as Harry gets to know his parents, the last section really brought home the fact that all is not right in the Potters world. Not so much a pleasant jolt, but very well executed. |
Prongs739
Friday 22nd August 2008 09:04 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Well it seems as though Ginny is a mini-me of Lilly Potter.
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gymnastgal19
Wednesday 19th March 2008 15:28 | A Wrinkle in Time |
wow!!! just wow!!!! That was awesome!!! Im glad that harry gets to spend time with his parents.... but idk... everything is too hunky dory.... something has to go wrong and soon... lol
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Aqua Fountain*
Monday 26th February 2007 04:23 | A Wrinkle in Time |
They could hear the soft sounds of muffled crying, then, "Just promise me that when he comes, you'll be here for us."
"I promise, Lily. I'll die to protect you and Harry."
Ginny was staring right at Harry now, and it was all he could do to hold in the tears that were forming. He swallowed hard to clear some of the feelings away and took Ginny in to his arms. -> That is so sad.
This chapter is brilliant and all, but I cant belive anyone being so open in front of a couple of strangers.
Any way, great chapter
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Fuzzy
Sunday 24th April 2005 17:42 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| Your story is so... sweet, adorable, funny, sad, and so many more I can't even begin to describe it. Your work fills me with joy every time I read it. Continue on! |
trogdor
Thursday 21st April 2005 14:10 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| This story is awsome!!! Please update soon!!!
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Black_White_And_Grey
Friday 18th March 2005 23:20 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Gawd, did I love this. I would probably give it a 9 out of 10- at least. There were so many parts that I really enjoyed... it was all I could do to keep from chortling aloud and disturbing the peace of this quiet house so late at night when I read that one part about the "Testiculitus Curse".... It's hard for me to keep from laughing right now typing it! Ahhhhh, that is so FUNNY!
Were you by any chance the same person who wrote the one about Harry proposing to Ginny, and Harry and Ginny wanted to keep it a secret... and then it all got out of hand? lol, the writing style just seemed familiar to me...
Anywho, great story! I loved it so much!! :) ;) You definitely have talent! |
BloodlessAce
Wednesday 16th March 2005 14:45 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| great chapter. great story.
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Neville
Wednesday 9th March 2005 12:14 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Good read. Just one nit-picky point (sorry). James refers to Moody as Mad-Eye. I'm under the impression that Moody has not yet lost his eye (Goblet Pensieve scene).
Keep it up - love your work!
Neville |
sonicdale
Wednesday 9th March 2005 09:03 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Testicular Curse? Oh, I love that!
this was good. Please continue! |
XiaoXiao
Tuesday 8th March 2005 23:48 | A Wrinkle in Time |
Wow. The ending was so bittersweet and sad.
I also love the way that Harry & Ginny flirt back and forth. They're so cute! |
p0tterfan
Tuesday 8th March 2005 21:48 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| So how many days do they have left? Fun story so far. Let's
hope some more 'action' happens soon :)
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Kelleypen
Tuesday 8th March 2005 18:41 | A Wrinkle in Time |
So how old is baby Harry? Wouldn't Sirius not care so much about what Dumbledore says and ask Harry and Ginny questions anyway?
Good story. |
dophingirl79
Tuesday 8th March 2005 18:23 | A Wrinkle in Time |
| such a sad and touching moment, Please keep up the good work. |
