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Reviews For A Sirius Matter by Thunder's Shadow

butterbeer101
Saturday 25th April 2009 05:33
A Sirius Matter
I think it was great! i totally agree with your disclaimer as well! I will always love Harry's era but there's so much more to play with here!
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 14th May 2008 17:42
A Sirius Matter
haha! nice ending
dandruff! lol
gymnastgal19
Saturday 12th January 2008 16:24
A Sirius Matter
hahaha i loved the ending! dandruff
and he didnt even finish asking her lol
Delfino
Tuesday 4th December 2007 17:29
A Sirius Matter
Hahahaha! That was absolutely perfect! I especially liked the dandruff part. Great job!
haileythefan
Tuesday 18th September 2007 16:16
A Sirius Matter
I like the last bit
myketje
Saturday 28th July 2007 01:56
A Sirius Matter
Soo funny!!
I loved it. That last sentence was great!!

Thxs

KISS KISS

mee
razer
Saturday 9th June 2007 02:04
A Sirius Matter
haha i loved it...was soo cute...u dont get many lily/james stories... the dandruff part was soo funny n so was the last line...great story
Aqua Fountain*
Tuesday 27th February 2007 02:27
A Sirius Matter
Remus just nodded with a smile on his face, and crept up behind Sirius. He took a salt container off of the Ravenclaw table, and shook it quietly over Sirius’ shoulder. He then put the salt behind his back, and made a show of peering closely at Sirius’ shoulder, gasping. Sirius whipped around.

“Sirius! Is that dandruff?!”

His job done, Remus casually walked away, but not before winking at both Lily and James. Sirius, meanwhile, caused a few heads to turn by screaming and running out of the Great Hall, presumably to the nearest mirror. James sighed, and turned to Lily.

“Lily, listen. I was wondering if you would go out--”

“Yes.”

...And the always-suave, cool, and collected James Potter promptly fell off his seat.
AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Good work
MissPenny45
Wednesday 22nd February 2006 15:53
A Sirius Matter
that was good... funny what happened to Sirius
Miss Effie
Wednesday 6th April 2005 18:20
A Sirius Matter
That was so perfect.  It ended wonderfully, and it had the Sirius joke in there!  What more could you want from a L/J fic?  ^_^  Excellent job.
Bondariana
Sunday 27th March 2005 15:49
A Sirius Matter
its funny - cool, but it doean't really match up to the title or the summary...
Delani
Friday 25th March 2005 16:39
A Sirius Matter

Hah. What a classic exit. I can certainly see dandruff making Sirius panic.

 

Del

Cacoethes Scribendi
Thursday 24th March 2005 18:00
A Sirius Matter

Perfect - i needed a bit of a laugh and this was just the right story to read.

SillyGillie
Tuesday 22nd March 2005 18:09
A Sirius Matter
Aww how cute! I loved it!! Adorable!
Shadow Hider
Tuesday 22nd March 2005 17:02
A Sirius Matter
hehehe that's great
Lulabelle
Monday 21st March 2005 20:16
A Sirius Matter

I liked this one shot.  It was adorable & gave us a glimpse of how the Maruaders might have been in school.  I think you did a great job of portraying Sirius, too, by the way.  If you decide to expand on this, I would definitely read it.  Great Job! 

P.S.  You mentioned a fic by Koonelli.  Where would I be able to find that?

 

Tuesday 22nd March 2005 04:42A Sirius Matter (Author Response)

Koonelli, I just realized, is not an author on PS.. You can find her work at fanfiction.net, though:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~Koonelli

Thanks for reviewing!

TigerLily8186
Monday 21st March 2005 19:16
A Sirius Matter
This is short and cute. I loved the part where Sirius ran screaming. Though, I see Sirius as being mostly cool and collected with the ladies as well. You should try to have expanded more on this. At least, try a few more shots at writing Marauder material. I love L/J, and good ones are so hard to find.
little_one
Monday 21st March 2005 18:13
A Sirius Matter

Cute story. I love the marauders, especially to write about because there's so much left up to our imaginations.  Great job, I look forward to more from you.

thehopefulGinnyPotter
Monday 21st March 2005 16:50
A Sirius Matter
That was great. And i also think that Jo should write about the MWPP era.
Pittsy
Monday 21st March 2005 13:36
A Sirius Matter
This was a really good start to hopefully an interesting story. I especially loved the last line- brilliant! Are you going to continue this? You really should. It would work as a standalone but really its too good to leave unfinished.
Pittsy
Monday 21st March 2005 13:36
A Sirius Matter
This was a really good start to hopefully an interesting story. I especially loved the last line- brilliant! Are you going to continue this? You really should. It would work as a standalone but really its too good to leave unfinished.
DADAGinny
Monday 21st March 2005 13:09
A Sirius Matter
Very funny!  What a great portrayal of Sirius!

dancinginmagic
Monday 21st March 2005 11:51
A Sirius Matter
Love it! Pity it's a one-shot, that's the only downside. Well done.
dophingirl79
Monday 21st March 2005 11:22
A Sirius Matter
I guess persistance finally paid off. good story.
tante
Monday 21st March 2005 10:22
A Sirius Matter
I'm sorry, it's officially adorable.  There are no other words in my mind.  Nice bit of fluff.