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Kelleypen
Friday 20th May 2005 17:09 | Sketches of Words | | Wonderful. And you captured the title so well with the twist at the end. Nice. | | Friday 20th May 2005 20:27 | Sketches of Words (Author Response) | | Thank you. This poem was particularly fun to write. Poetical twists are so fun to slip in. | Allie Kiwi
Saturday 14th May 2005 23:27 | Sketches of Words | | You get into your characters minds so well, and also bring in aspects of canon so easily. Lovely poem. I particularly liked the lines where she wondered about his hair and why he didn't fix it. *grin* | | Sunday 15th May 2005 12:41 | Sketches of Words (Author Response) | | Well, I would wonder about his hair if I were in her place. Wouldn't you? Thank you for the wonderful compliment about getting into a character's mindset. To be honest, poetry just seems more intimate. It draws you even closer to the character. | Delani
Monday 11th April 2005 15:49 | Sketches of Words | Wow....wow. I liked this so much, but I'm at a loss of how to compliment you more than...wow. Well, well done!
Del | | Tuesday 12th April 2005 20:50 | Sketches of Words (Author Response) | | I'm glad you liked them. These two were fun to write. I have another one that should be coming up soon (though the style will differ slightly), and I suppose I'll have to see what'll inspire me. Lily PoV peotry is quite fun to do. |
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