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Reviews For Residual Remains by Sassenach

mary-v
Monday 11th April 2005 07:48
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Ohhh- and the plot thickens!!! Obviouskly Collin loves Ginny- and he'll probably be the biggest obstacle to overcome, but it seems that if Harry and Ginny can get over their stubbiorn personalities, then they have already paved their road to happiness. Which is much easier said than done!!!! Well, I can;t wait for you to update! I absoluterly love where this story is going!

~Maria~

Monday 11th April 2005 11:10Residual Remains (Author Response)
Thanks! Colin isn't so much an obstacle more than a royal pain. Harry and Ginny have bigger things to worry about! You'll see......
sonicdale
Monday 11th April 2005 05:44
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Couple of spelling errors. 'peaked' should be peeked, 'mislead' should be misled.

Whoa. Colin and Ginny? Yowza. Um, this might not get you fans on PS. I'm all for Ginny with other guys at times... I wonder if she and Harry will hook up though...

Fireball! Ha!

Hermione torturing Harry for info? That is sooo Hermione it made me laugh.

What? He left Hermione? That wasn't nice. Humph. Harry must really be distracted to do that.

Good fic. Like it. Keep it up.
Monday 11th April 2005 11:09Residual Remains (Author Response)

Wow I'm amazed my beta didn't catch those. She's extremely thorough and when I mean extremely, every chapter comes back to me with red all over the place!! iT'S insane!

Oh don't worry about Colin, he's just minor plot. He and Ginny are not getting anywhere near each other. If anything, Colin is just around to stir up trouble!

Don't worry, Hermione isn't mad at all over being left at dinner. She wanted him to not come back! Scheming girl....she does have her moments.

juliet
Monday 11th April 2005 01:44
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continues to show great promise.  Well done
Monday 11th April 2005 11:10Residual Remains (Author Response)
Thanks!
Wild Magelet
Sunday 10th April 2005 23:08
Residual Remains

Harry laughed. “They’ll probably make up some outrageous story of us being together romantically.”

I'm impressed that she refrained from taking his sweater and beating him with it.

Great chapter though. Love the broodiness of Harry. Actually, love JealousOverGinny!Harry, full stop. Agree that Colin's being a prat, but it would be tiring to constantly have to comfort someone in their angst over the same person, year after year, particularly if you had feelings for them yourself...? Honestly, though, I can more see Ginny being the type of person to keep her feelings to herself, especially after the embarrassment of the early crush years.

I really am enjoying the story. You write extremely well.

Monday 11th April 2005 11:13Residual Remains (Author Response)

I thought it was high time that Harry start doing the chasing! He should feel bad that he's neglected the fact that Ginny's always had feelings for him.

Yeah, Ginny doesn't like to talk at all but Colin gets through to her. He does have a special place in her heart, she just isn't in love with him.

As for the beating with sweater comment, yeah, she should have but I chose the route the twins would most likely pursue. And that was a joke! If there was third twin, Ginny would have been included!- that's how I see it anyway.

Melindaleo
Sunday 10th April 2005 21:24
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Good chapter.  Colin is thoroughly annoying. What happened to his own hero worship?  A bit of the pot calling the kettle black there, wasn't it?  Besides, Ginny already has 6 brothers - who like Harry btw - so she doesn't need another.  Hmmfff.

You know, I was actually nervous about Draco Malfoy.  That was quite clever of you.  Lucius, Draco and Bellatrix together and all out to get Harry?  Poor kid just can't catch a break, can he?

I like the idea of Ginny running an apothocary, but something about Colin's pictures sounds ominous.  I can't wait for more.

Monday 11th April 2005 11:19Residual Remains (Author Response)

Thanks! Colin is a bit of a snob here, and boy are his hero worshipping days gone! That ended after Ginny got her heart broken.

I'm nervous about Draco. He's a little out of control...and he's going to cause some real trouble! Yeah, Harry has never been lucky and he's not going to get any luckier in this story.

Thanks, I like Ginny running an apothecary too. Other people question me on it, but I just answer with this: Everyone makes Ginny a healer, a mediwizard, a therapist, or something to do with Transfiguration...well I want to make her something that no one would likely make her!

I think Colin's pictures were going to be bigger in the story, but I forgot about them! OOpsy! I'll see what I can do about that, thanks for the reminder!

p0tterfan
Sunday 10th April 2005 20:44
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Well, hopefully Hermione popped over to Colin's table for dinner :) 

Plot seems to be coming along well.  Looking forward to the next chapter!  
Sunday 10th April 2005 20:47Residual Remains (Author Response)

Hah,  you know, after I wrote this chapter I thought to myself, "Self, Harry was extremely rude for skipping out on Hermione at dinner and leaving her with the bill." I don't know why I didn't make him go back. Maybe it was because he was just so buzzed after being so close to Ginny that he couldn't think.

Thanks for saying the plot is coming out well. I have doubts every once in a while. Let me know if I move too fast!

emmamoonpotter
Sunday 10th April 2005 17:56
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Oooh!  I really like this story!  I am looking forward to lots of action!  
Sunday 10th April 2005 19:02Residual Remains (Author Response)
Hahah that emoticon is hilarious. It reminds me of the stand up comedian Dave Chappelle's show called "Killing Me Softly" where he talks about African American's and the prejudice against them. There's a part where a cop enters the house to check it out and sees a black guy and (Chapelle) hits the mic stand saying "Oh my god, he's still here!" LOL You gotta check it out!
Lulabelle
Sunday 10th April 2005 17:43
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Well Harry really put his foot in it this time, didn't he?        “They’ll probably make up some outrageous story of us being together romantically.”          Honestly, what a thing to say!  But it somehow sounds just like something Harry would say, which makes it just right.  I'm really enjoying this fic.  I can't wait to see what Draco has up his sleeve.  Update soon please!
Sunday 10th April 2005 18:59Residual Remains (Author Response)
Yes HE DID! It's just the sort of thing that he would be thinking at the time and because he's so nervous around her would actually say it out loud. hehe Thanks for the review and the support. Trust me, Draco has a few tricks up his sleeve!