gymnastgal19
Monday 29th October 2007 20:11 | And She Welcomed It |
awww!!! I kinda figured that it wasnt harry that died :p
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| Saturday 8th December 2007 21:40 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| Lol thats the twist i was going for! =D |
pyromain
Monday 3rd September 2007 10:27 | And She Welcomed It |
| she does welcome a lot, LOL. Nice story. |
| Monday 3rd September 2007 12:36 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
InnerHermione
Saturday 11th March 2006 23:25 | And She Welcomed It |
| I totally thought it was about Harry at the beginning. Nicely twisted! I love the fact that at the end, Ginny does NOT leap directly into Harry's arms, but actually takes the time to start transitioning from total despair to okay-ness. |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 21:32 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| Thanks! Like I said lower down, I think Ginny just leaping into his arms would be too unrealistic. And I'm glad you liked the twist! |
Muggle Witch
Saturday 16th April 2005 11:29 | And She Welcomed It |
| What a twist. Well done.
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| Saturday 25th August 2007 21:27 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
mary-v
Wednesday 13th April 2005 07:11 | And She Welcomed It |
Oh- this was just so bittersweet!You did an excellent job! Reading this, I first thought Harry was the one who died! I was surprised to say the least. Ah well. Oh! And I'm glad she didn;t just fly into his arms.
“Anyway, you’re right; I’m not ready to start a new relationship, and I don’t think I will be any time soon.” His face fell. She knew she was breaking his heart. He nodded to show he understood, and turned and almost walked out the door.
“But,” she said. She watched him turn, his face full of sorrow, but in his emerald eyes, she saw hope. “When I am ready, you’ll be the first to know.” She finished.
Excellent. Nice story!
~Maria~ |
XiaoXiao
Tuesday 12th April 2005 23:40 | And She Welcomed It |
Oh, that was lovely. Beautiful sensory writing, and the plot was simple but elegant. |
dophingirl79
Tuesday 12th April 2005 21:50 | And She Welcomed It |
| so sweet and short, are you going to make into anything more? |
Black_White_And_Grey
Tuesday 12th April 2005 19:37 | And She Welcomed It |
| Ohhhhh, you got me with that last line!! It's very simple, very eloquent (sp?). Sweet and sad and short but not in a bad way! Awww, how lovely! Good job, and I'm glad to see that it got up in the end! :) :D ;) |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 21:23 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
Thank you dahling.
And that's how I spell eloquent, so I assume that's right too lol. |
Delani
Tuesday 12th April 2005 18:54 | And She Welcomed It |
Hmm. You worked the mystery very well, but it almost changed tones too quickly. In one minute she's stopped staunching the flow of tears and pain and in he next is feeling "warmth spread" (aka affection for Harry) ; which isn't too unreasonable if you consider her subconscious love for Harry, so overall, this was clever but a little (just a teensy weensy bit) unrealistic in her sudden minor recovery.
Delani (just a teeny tiny little bit, because I did like this) |
| Saturday 25th August 2007 21:22 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| I didn't mean it to come too quickly. I meant to show how all along, even though she was with Dean and loved him, she always had the underlying love for Harry, which finally came out through the warmth. But I'm glad you still liked it! |
emmamoonpotter
Tuesday 12th April 2005 18:37 | And She Welcomed It |
| You had me going! I thought it was Harry, but it was Dean.
Very well written! Poor Ginny! I'm glad you didn't make her
fall into his arms and profess undying love because he finally told her
how he felt. Bravo!
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| Saturday 25th August 2007 21:07 | And She Welcomed It (Author Response) |
| Yeah, I think just falling into another man's arms after her first love died is too unrealistic. Thanks a lot! |
