garvon82
Friday 14th November 2014 05:55 | Time Enough |
| good |
harry_ginnyfan
Tuesday 14th July 2009 18:46 | Time Enough |
| good start |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 10th April 2008 15:51 | Time Enough |
huh... interesting
Ive read this story before and loved it!
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dailyprophetreporting
Sunday 23rd March 2008 02:11 | Time Enough |
Wow! What a great way to start a story. I bet you got a bunch of reviewers complaining about the cliff hanger, but that's not me. I love writing that gets me thinking, asking myself questions about intent and direction, and you've done that right from the start. I can't help being totally sucked in, and for being one chapter into the story, that's a wonderful place to be.
In fact, I might have been even more delighted had you stopped with Ginny at the door and made it even murkier what you're leading us into. But I can understand why you didn't; the less tolerant readers would have been calling for blood.
Anyway, I gather that somebody's been in a coma for five years. And all H/G convention points to it being Harry, but if you've bothered to set up this intricate a way of hiding the man's identity, I'm guessing the answer's not going to be that predicable. I'd love to see another dimension thrown into the story right at the start. Neville? Dean? I don't know your writing so, it's just a guess, but I'll put my two knuts on the former. And I'll probably find out in a few minutes when I start Chapter 2.
Anyway, I've sadly become a rather lax reviewer lately so I'm not sure how much you'll be hearing from me as I go forward, but I definitely wanted to thank for giving me so much to think about so quickly. I'm very intrigued to see what you do with it.
-KC |
gymnastgal19
Thursday 22nd November 2007 21:01 | Time Enough |
so... I take it that herminoe is pregnant and the patient that you have not yet named is harry....
lol
nice way to keep the suspense!
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psycholis
Monday 15th October 2007 00:55 | Time Enough |
| There's a very palpable tension to this chapter that makes me feel drawn in to the situation. Since this my re-reading of this story for review, I know what's gonna happen, but the build up to the next part is intense. Poor Ginny - my feelings really went out for her and Harry throughout this entire story. Great start to what I consider to be the most emotionally taut story I've read so far. |
| Tuesday 16th October 2007 11:00 | Time Enough (Author Response) |
First off, I'm flattered this is a re-read and you're taking time to re-review, it's nice to get feedback and thoughts from that perspective.
I really enjoyed writing this first chapter and setting the tone for my adventure. I wanted to make it tense, create that sympathy for Ginny- and for Harry, but make them stronger people from the experience too.
Thank you so much for your lovely words, I'm so flattered you like the story.
Amy |
damson82
Thursday 6th September 2007 08:55 | Time Enough |
Can I just say that in my opinion .. Your stories should be published !! I think you write amazingly.
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| Thursday 6th September 2007 09:58 | Time Enough (Author Response) |
Thanks so much for the lovely compliments, and thanks for reading; I'm glad you've enjoyed the fic!
Amy |
damson82
Thursday 6th September 2007 08:50 | Time Enough |
| The reason I have not posted before is because ...... WOW !!!!! |
avalon_maiden
Friday 10th August 2007 02:14 | Time Enough |
| Nice chapter, I just want to know what's going on! Hehe Hopefully the next chapter explains a bit... |
Pottercope12
Friday 17th November 2006 13:34 | Time Enough |
| Once again, very good. Sometimes these chapters drag on, but very good |
| Friday 17th November 2006 13:49 | Time Enough (Author Response) |
Um, thanks- I think.
When I originally posted this fic, my readers asked for longer chapters as opposed to shorter ones. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Saturday 10th June 2006 14:03 | Time Enough |
| I don't get it. Is that Harry?, and did he die, or is he alive? |
Cherry
Friday 30th September 2005 13:18 | Time Enough |
Great start up for a story!
Cherry xxx
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PHsname
Thursday 25th August 2005 20:18 | Time Enough |
fairly well-paced first chapter.
enough to draw me in, but still...kind of frustrating with the lack of information. :\
just my personal opinion though. |
amamama
Thursday 25th August 2005 11:36 | Time Enough |
Wow... what a start! I skimmed through the latest update (chapter
12) and decided I would like to take the time to get the whole story
form the beginning. Wonderful description of the awakening, and
all the emotions involved - and my, am I ever so curious to find out
what's going on here. What is it they don't want to tell?
What did Ginny put in her drawer before she left? I guess I'll
find out soon, huh?
Thanks!
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SillyGillie
Thursday 7th July 2005 18:48 | Time Enough |
| Oh very promising I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters you have posted! |
Sugarquills23
Wednesday 8th June 2005 09:25 | Time Enough |
| Good intensity and emotion as Ginny headed to the hospital. I'm looking forward to reading more. |
Delani
Thursday 28th April 2005 14:22 | Time Enough |
Oh my lord, this is amazing. The intensity is so well written and thoughtfully created. I now have to peel my eyeballs back, as they are quite literally glued to the monitor. Wow, this was...well, intense!
Can't wait for chapter two... |
p0tterfan
Wednesday 27th April 2005 21:41 | Time Enough |
| 5 year coma for Harry ? Nice to have the next chapter already posted !
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ChaoticK
Wednesday 27th April 2005 15:02 | Time Enough |
SQUEEEEEEEE!
Y'all are gonna love this story to pieces!
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