I thought it was really hillarious, I liked how George played Ron, grat job with the characters.

Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back

leovtatingT

Hilarious! Well written, good ideas. I hope you can overcome your laziness long enough to write another fic!

I tried to make him less mean and more sweet than George, but maybe it doesn't show.  They might blend together so you don't pay attention to who says what.  I know I practically missed the whole Ron-loves-and-always-argues-with-Hermione thing for the first few books because he has almost the same relationship with her as Harry so what they say to her blended together for me.

I notice the voice thing the most over the phone.  Like when you call your friend and you think you're talking to her but it's really her mom.  Not that it ever happened to me in a bad way.

Thanks for the review.

I think, if you're going to question how DEs -- most of whom were respectable members of society, and adults -- entered the Ministry, then you should also question how it was that six teenagers managed to waltz right in when they should have been at school.

I loved this story. Charlie's reaction had me giggling and George was so perfectly in character. I'm also glad that you jumped to George and Charlie at the top of the steps. Whilst it would have been nice to see the moment, it made more sense to cut to the brothers. Brilliant work!

Katie

Exactly.  There should have been some sort of guard there.  Or someone in the hallway working late, or something. 

The reason I cut to the stairs is because I really have no idea of how to write romance.  There's always a kiss at the end of every story, which is nearly a necessity though it may get old, so instead of putting in the worst-written kiss you've ever read, I changed scenes.

Thanks for the review!

::still laughing::  That was funny! as Luna would say.  (My husband is mocking me for laughing so hard)  You have excellent comic timing; not easy. 

I like that you used Charlie and George instead of both twins--way more realistic and family-like.

Hmm.  Agreed about your DoM mention (oh, I noticed that all right)...but even a fly-by mention is better than none at all.  A fun bit of something for us to chew on as we await HBP...  *squeeing*

Good work.  :)

They proabably used some form of dark magic to get in... Or the floo network. If the Ministry employees could floo in, the DEs could proabably find a way to mask themselves as workers or something.

As for your story, I loved it! I bet you could write a novel-lenth fic if you set your mind to it. Says the guy whos supposed to be cleaning his basement, but is instead reading HP fanfiction... meh. You could still do it. Your definetly seem to be a good enough writer... Much better than anything I could do. Give it a shot. Whats the worst that could happen?

As for procrastination, your talking to the king here. Just chip away at it half an hour a day or something... You'll proabably get on a roll every once in a while, and get it done within a few months. Even if you dont finish it before HBP comes out, who cares?

I hope you do decide to do a longer one. This little fic was exelent. You could do a series of one-shots that tie together if you dont want to feel obligated to update on a weekly basis...

Thanks for the review!  I think a series of one-shots may be a good idea.  That way if I forget to update and people actually like the story, I won't have a mob of people with pickaxes at my door :)