Delani
Sunday 12th June 2005 22:32 | And in that Sleep |
"...sliding backwards until he could prop his chin on his wrist. "Hi, Ginny."
This was a great line. It was relaxed, letharigc, and natural.
Haha. I have to laugh at Hugh Jars, not related to the American Hugh Jass, by chance? This whole piece is so sleepy and shrouded in a boggling, yet almost visible, mist. The truth is so tangible, yet drowsy and jumbled; it's quite fantastic! The style meshes together perfectly with the plot.
Delani |
| Tuesday 14th June 2005 02:45 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
| Thanks Delani! Yep, I think your Hugh Jass would be related to our Hugh Jars. I couldn't resist the temptation and I thank you for your kind comments on the fic. |
Lulabelle
Sunday 22nd May 2005 10:46 | And in that Sleep |
| This is pretty interesting. I'm enjoying it so far & really want to see what happens next. Update soon please! |
| Tuesday 14th June 2005 02:41 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
| Thanks Lulabelle! I'm glad that you stopped by to tell me. Next chapter is about 70% and needs some explanations adding, so hopefully an update will be soon. |
Cornuthaum
Friday 20th May 2005 05:41 | And in that Sleep |
"Nice perfume! What did she do? Marinade herself in it and knock the poor sod unconscious?"
To be honest, this made my day.
Humbly I bow before you and your skilled depiction of sleep
deprivation, as well as what happens to sleep-deprived magical
youngsters.
*Yay&Cheer*
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| Tuesday 14th June 2005 02:39 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
| Thanks Cornuthaum! As you have made mine for reading and pausing to review. Boy-talk doesn't come easily to me so I'm glad to have raised a smile with Dean's quip. |
p0tterfan
Thursday 19th May 2005 21:51 | And in that Sleep |
This is a really well done story. Esp. like the sleepy Harry
moments. Its done very well. So some implied H/G moments in
there. Hopefully Harry continues in this sleepy mode for a bit -
makes for some very interesting reading :)
Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter!
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| Friday 20th May 2005 03:59 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
Thank you P0tterfan! Sleepy!Harry is fun to do. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Next chapter needs pruning into shape and then t'will be off to my superberous Beta. |
Melindaleo
Thursday 19th May 2005 18:05 | And in that Sleep |
I like the idea of Voldemort trying to use sleep deprivation to throw poor Harry off. He's acting like he's drunk, which is a hoot, but he needs more Ginny time.
I loved when he transfigured McGonagall. I think that would be Harry's exact reaction on being suddenly awoken. |
| Friday 20th May 2005 03:53 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
Thank you Melindaleo. Yep, Harry does get himself into some scrapes, doesn't he? Ginny is keeping an eye on him, as you'll see...
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
Bart
Thursday 19th May 2005 16:21 | And in that Sleep |
It came to Neville in a dream? Why does that make me nervous?
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| Friday 20th May 2005 03:47 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
I honestly have no idea, Bart....
Maybe tis because you've seen how I can twist things...? |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 19th May 2005 16:14 | And in that Sleep |
Many apologies, but I have sent my Beta the wrong version of this chapter. Baffy is a complete nutcase!
I hope to have the corrected version with you as soon as possible!
What am I like! |
| Friday 20th May 2005 03:43 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
And with a swish and flick -tis done!
Thanks Katieay! |
EvieMarie
Thursday 19th May 2005 16:12 | And in that Sleep |
| Oh, I want poor Harry to get better! And more h/g please! lol |
| Friday 20th May 2005 03:44 | And in that Sleep (Author Response) |
| Thanks Evamarie. I'll see what I can do, but you know how stubborn that young man can get... |
