I haven't read all of this yet, but the first chapter I really loved! Hooray for you, you got Harry very well captured! (Somehow however, I'm not sure if he would necessarily actually SAY that he couldn't cry because he would be feeling weak.... But, maybe he'd beeen meaning to say that all along.... Whatev!) The grief is done very well... and I loved the stuff in italics!! Great stuff! I hope that Ron doesn't die...