harry'sgurl
Wednesday 15th June 2005 13:30 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| This is a really good story so far. |
dancinginmagic
Thursday 2nd June 2005 13:24 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Aww! I think it's so cute when they hold hands.
The thoughts were good. You're right, the thoughts were a great insight into how their thoughts developed.
And love! Now for the hard part; how - or if - they manage to tell each other.
Sarah |
| Friday 3rd June 2005 00:48 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Oh, yes. That'll be the hard part. |
Nimloki
Wednesday 1st June 2005 10:28 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Fun story. I like you're inner dialogs alot. Keep writing your vision.
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| Thursday 2nd June 2005 01:21 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Thanks for saying that. Those dialogues were a matter of dispute between Jenadamson and myself. She thought that the dialogues were a bit too much, while I insisted that I didn't want the reader to guess what's going on inside H/G, but take a look at the development of their thoughts. |
p0tterfan
Monday 30th May 2005 20:14 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Oh oh ... well, the brothers might have a thing or two to say to the
two of them. Looking forward to the Weasley's reaction to the not
so together couple :)
Keep up the good work!
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| Tuesday 31st May 2005 01:05 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| There might be a surprise. |
Byquist
Monday 30th May 2005 19:06 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Awesome story so far! I can't wait for more... On another note, in Kansas the state motto is Ad Astra Per Aspera and that means 'To the stars through difficulty'... I'd assume Per Aspera Ad Astra means something similar. |
| Tuesday 31st May 2005 01:04 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| It means exactly the same. Word order is not that important in Latin, flection is everything. However, word order can be used to put stress on one part of a sentence or phrase. In the case of Kansas, I suppose they wanted to highlight the aim, i.e. the stars are worth some troubles. The original saying puts more emphasis on the fact that it will be hard work to reach the stars at all. |
Aaran St Vines
Monday 30th May 2005 16:41 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
I am enjoying this.
The rush-into-each-others-arms-declaring-undying-love scenario always bothers me. You haven't done it.
You've made the cliche bathing suit scenario palpable. Good work.
Now make me believe it is true love, not just puppy-love. It's will be hard because they are 15 & 16.
I think you can do it. |
| Tuesday 31st May 2005 00:55 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Thanks for your encouragement. Remember the title? It wouldn't really fit puppy-love, would it? Keep r/r. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Monday 30th May 2005 16:20 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| I love this chapter and the story! Poor Arthur... I am guessing he should be worried. |
| Tuesday 31st May 2005 00:53 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| The next letter will be Molly to Dumbledore ... |
levotatingT
Monday 30th May 2005 15:19 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
Wow that was so awsome. I loved how they went to the pool the first day and Ginny Turned it into a game. Excellent job with the characters. I've been waitng a while for this to be updated, please hurry and update again.
Great job, keep writing, and PLez write back
levotatingT |
| Tuesday 31st May 2005 00:52 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Keep with me, there's more. Thanks for r/r. |
Lulabelle
Monday 30th May 2005 14:40 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| It's so light & fluffy that it almost floats away! Very nice chapter. I really liked it. I hope you plan to update soon because I'd love to see how Ron & Hermione will react to this new development. And to each other for that matter! :) Keep it up! |
| Tuesday 31st May 2005 00:49 | Per Aspera Ad Astra (Author Response) |
| Sorry to disappoint you, but things will take a different turn. |
Muggle Witch
Monday 30th May 2005 13:42 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| What a great chapter. I love how they are slowly 'getting there.' The brief fluff was very sweet. |
snowbear96
Monday 30th May 2005 13:42 | Per Aspera Ad Astra |
| Hey wow!! Cool, I love this story. Nice and gentl, you can see how their relaitonship is building and growing. + forever!! |
