Prongs739
Saturday 30th August 2008 13:48 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
Whoa! At least he didn't freak. |
gymnastgal19
Monday 17th March 2008 11:58 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
haha very nice.
I love hermonies revenge :p pink hair?! that would be a sight to see
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 6th November 2007 06:50 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
hahaha I love the pranks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wandwavingwannabe
Tuesday 14th June 2005 10:21 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
You really do know how to put Snape in his place where different characters are concerned. It's always good for a few laughs.
How nice of Prof. Dumbledor to sell off the castle to Harry and Ginny for such a small price. At least they have a home now.
One question and I should've asked in my review on On Being Late: Correct me if I'm wrong but in your story The Bargain isn't Harry & Ginny supposed to produce an heir within a year of their nuptuials? Just like they had 48 hrs to consumate their marriage?
Anyway another great job on your writing skills and I look forward to reading more.
WandWavingWannaBe |
Kelleypen
Monday 13th June 2005 17:38 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
| Nice--I like the pranking. I'm glad you made Harry head boy. I suspect Jo will too. Dumbledore giving away a castle though--well, for only 50 galleons--what magnaminity. |
Spark Soliton
Monday 13th June 2005 13:19 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
| The delayed bladder-burster hex was so funny, that must have been one of Ginny's inventions! I also very much enjoyed 'kick-in-the-shins'-scenes in the bedroom, the fact that Ginny's sleeping habits inlcude kicks to what ever is disturbing her didn't surprise me either, I can imagine it has come in useful with six older gits for brothers! Yet again, as a nice little continuation of "The Bargain" world, the writing was impeccable! |
harry'sgurl
Monday 13th June 2005 11:38 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
| This was great! |
Gridley
Monday 13th June 2005 04:59 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
| Score thus far: Harry: 1, Hermione: 1. Why don't I think it will end here? |
| Monday 13th June 2005 07:37 | The Bargain: Side Effects (Author Response) |
| Because you're *smart*, that's why! Pranks are so fun to write...
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sonicdale
Sunday 12th June 2005 22:28 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
Oh, I was hoping you'd continue "The Bargain"!
Love the pranking that Harry and Hermione have already started -- and
school hasn't even begun! Ron's reaction was spot on... and I thought
the Snape thing was great. Can't wait to see Malfoy get more.
Good work.
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| Monday 13th June 2005 07:45 | The Bargain: Side Effects (Author Response) |
| There will definitely be more Malfoy as Harry and Ginny learn the ropes of being married.
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p0tterfan
Sunday 12th June 2005 21:54 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
So many things to choose from in this chapter. Cursing Malfoy,
bashing Snape, pranking Hermione, not to mention the payback :)
$50 for a castle seems like a great deal though. Nice to find out
what/who was in that castle too!
Keep up the good work.
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| Monday 13th June 2005 07:46 | The Bargain: Side Effects (Author Response) |
| Yeah... I had to resolve the castle plot hole that never got resolved
in the body of "The Bargain". Without having to create a whole
new plot weeks before HBP is released, this was the best solution.
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BloodlessAce
Sunday 12th June 2005 19:14 | The Bargain: Side Effects |
| loved the pranks in this chapter. great chapter.
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| Monday 13th June 2005 07:46 | The Bargain: Side Effects (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I hope you enjoy the next one.
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