fine since this a one-shot i suppose i should review...

i love it...

good enough? lol no but really its awesome!! be sure to write more awesome fics sooon!

You're right the last line does sound like you are setting this up to be a multi-chapter fic, but it doesn't matter.  This is a wonderful story, able to stand on it's own. 

I really liked the line about Fred and George being unbearable.  It really caught me by surprise and I laughed out loud.  I loved that it popped into Ginny's head just after how bad Mrs. Weasley was going to be.

Your interactions between Harry and Ginny were really done well.  You kept them short, but meaningful.  They felt right and rang true.  Sometimes people force Harry and Ginny, but you really found the right pace for this fic.  Good job.

I just wanted to reiterate how much I liked this fic.  Great job, it's wonderful.

That is really good.  It does seem to be as if you are going to continue.  I know you said in the beginning you weren't going to keep going but would begging help??????

great job, keep writing, and Plez write back

levotatingT

Noo! You can't make this a one-shot, it's way too good for that! This is one of the best fics I've read in a very long time, I love it to pieces  Great writing and you just stayed in canon so well that I thought "This could actually happen in HBP!" I beg you to consider making a sequel, even if it's just another one-shot!

//Kev

Awesome story!!! I for one would have liked to see them kiss ... perhaps in one of your other stories?  I'm off to go see....

'Mione

This story is utterly perfect.  I am enthralled by your development of Ginny as an independent person and as a young woman under the mixed expectations of her family as well as her own.  Ginny's gift to Harry and her demand were a stroke of genius.

Your characterisation of Harry was extremely well done, too.  He is pained by his experiences, but he's able to move onward.  Certainly, this is one of the best fics I've read in a while.

Argh!!  Oh, this just killed me...

He moved half an inch towards her, still staring down into her eyes, and she in turn moved a full inch. He lowered his head – and –

-they were plunged into complete and utter darkness.

And now we have to suffer... ; )  Anyhow, thank you for this wonderful little one shot.  I was in need of some H/G fluffy goodness and this more than fulfilled my craving!

Now if I could just have some of that cake as well... ; )

      Nooooo - how can this possibly be a one-shot!!!!!! And oh the CRUELTY of not even letting them share a single kiss!!!

On a more positive note, after the above rant, this was brilliant writing, loved the dialogue and I very much enjoyed that you wrote it in Ginny's POV, it made for a refreshing change!!!! The "Ginny Sandwich" sent me into gales of laughter, well the whole reaction to Ginny Prefect badge made laugh !

So a full round of  - lovely, wonderful little story!!! The only bad thing I can say about it is that it needs another chapter!!! Perhaps an epilogue, set a couple of years in the future, with Ginny looking back???