gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 10:06 | Mixing Temperatures |
awwww!!! that was really cute!!!!
I loved how worried harry was and how he took ginny's hand
|
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 13th November 2007 20:48 | Mixing Temperatures |
haha I liked this :d I found it a little hard to follow though...
|
rdprice29
Saturday 9th December 2006 20:15 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Squeeee! This was very cute! I love your writing, you capture both Harry and Ginny perfectly, and I feel like I'm reading an outtake to JKR's work. Great job! |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 16:46 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I can think of no higher compliment than that someone feels they are reading an outtake. |
Uzamaki-girl
Tuesday 12th September 2006 16:07 | Mixing Temperatures |
| That was brilliant.^^ |
| Thursday 26th April 2007 16:47 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Maura
Sunday 7th May 2006 23:14 | Mixing Temperatures |
Alright I have no idea what you're talking about...this is adorable!! I love Ginny's candy, Fred and George's covert opperations and most especially Harry's transparent over-concern! I especially loved that you kept the ending simple, no overly fussy declarations of feelings or drawn out get together, just a simple request that means a lot and smiles. Perfect. Stop being silly.
Look pretty smilies! You're story is arific! Har. |
SillyGillie
Sunday 13th November 2005 09:35 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Very adorable! Nicely done. |
| Tuesday 3rd January 2006 15:34 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thank you. (Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to your lovely reviews, SG.)
|
levotatingT
Monday 11th July 2005 21:00 | Mixing Temperatures |
AWWW how romantic, I absolutley loved it
great job, keep writing, and PLez write back
levotatingT |
| Thursday 14th July 2005 23:31 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Levotating T. :) So glad that you loved the story. Cheers!
|
tante
Wednesday 6th July 2005 20:22 | Mixing Temperatures |
I love the beginning where Hermione and Ron are making everyone ill with their sweetness. The flying was lovely - it felt cool. The ending is absolutely perfect! I love it.
I got a little muddled at times in the middle. Why would Molly be angry? Why couldn't Ginny just be herself when she switched the candies since she said she was from WWW anyway? Why did George box up the candies instead of leaving Ginny to do it? And what's "the usual place?"
|
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 22:24 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
Thanks, Tante! Your points are well-taken and very much appreciated. I have some revising ahead of me...thank you for encouraging me to do the right thing! You're fabulous, of course.
I'm glad that you liked the beginning sweetness so well. Also,
it's neat to know that you could feel the flying part. Always
nice when something like that comes across the page the same as it
formed in my mind.
|
VictoryonWings
Tuesday 5th July 2005 21:31 | Mixing Temperatures |
| I
really enjoyed this fic. At first, I was a bit disappointed that
there wasn't more Harry/Ginny action, but the more I thought about it,
I think that the story ended perfectly. If Harry and Ginny had
kissed in the end, the story would have been too fluffy and
sugar-sweet. Also, I can see canon Harry not having the guts to
kiss her in the end; he's more subtle with his displays of
affection. I think everyone was wonderfully in character.
Fantastic work!
|
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 22:17 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Oh, I'm so glad that the characterization worked! And I agree
that Harry is more subtle...at least as we presently understand
him. If holding hands is a stretch, I can't imagine a kiss being
any easier. At least...well...not in this fic. I'm glad that the end worked for you, and that you enjoyed this fic.
|
XiaoXiao
Tuesday 5th July 2005 07:55 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Oooh, very lovely. I really liked the ending, with the chess
game; "it's your turn" was a perfect expression of how poor Ginny must
feel.
|
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 22:09 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
Hee. Yeah, I have a difficult time imagining Ginny making a first
move regarding their relationship...I suppose we'll see what happens,
though. :crossing fingers:
|
snowball
Tuesday 5th July 2005 01:30 | Mixing Temperatures |
| A marvellous story, Harry and Ginny getting together slowly but surely. And Harry finally cared about her!! |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:49 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| You know that he will!!!
|
TigerLily8186
Monday 4th July 2005 23:36 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Oh..excellent how you brought back the temperature reference again at the end. I wonder what exactly the bad candies were that she had to switch... This was cute. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:48 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Oh, I'm so glad that you liked the temperature reference at the
end! And regarding the candies...I'll have to revise that in
there.
|
Split Decision
Monday 4th July 2005 14:13 | Mixing Temperatures |
| I don't think I quite grasped all of what was going on here (WWW supplying Zonkos, their competitor? For whatever reason, this is odd) but its a very good story nonetheless, particularly the last bit will playing chess. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:46 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked the story in spite of its atrocious, muddled
middle. (I'm considering calling it the midden rather than the
middle. )
A friend suggested that I rewrite this part and I think that I
will...(you were not the only person that I so inconsiderately
confused. ) Anyhow, as I'm revising the fic, this
makes your comment particularly appreciated by me, because it gives me
something else to work on, so a heartfelt thanks to you!
But, really. I'm glad that you liked it anyway.
|
Pegasus
Saturday 2nd July 2005 07:05 | Mixing Temperatures |
Sigh............. Isn't young love wonderful. great job. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:37 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
Young love is great!
Here's hoping we get to read some young love in...8 days...
|
x_Rose_x
Saturday 2nd July 2005 05:22 | Mixing Temperatures |
| I like it, well done, I like the ending line!
|
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:37 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I like the ending line as well...it's among my favorites.
|
thehopefulGinnyPotter
Friday 1st July 2005 21:40 | Mixing Temperatures |
| I loved the no drama transition. Some fics make me feel like there should be clanging bells when the relationship finally occurs. This one seemed natural. Good work on this fic. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:35 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thank you! I'm glad that the no-drama transition worked for
you. I'm completely biased, but I think natural transitions are
more in keeping with reality (it's so very much not-Hollywood,
though! ).
|
Arnel
Friday 1st July 2005 00:47 | Mixing Temperatures |
Awww! This is so sweet! You’ve captured the very essence of what makes Harry Harry with his last gesture, look and sentence: Ginny is a lucky witch to have Harry care so much about her. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:34 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
Thank you, Arnel! I'm so glad that Harry was properly Harry.
(8 days...)
|
Bella
Thursday 30th June 2005 20:26 | Mixing Temperatures |
Very, very good! A little confusing at parts, but overall, very in character and well-written. Great work!
Bella |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:32 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| I agree that it was confusing in parts. Ah, well...that's what
happens when you have to write in the middle of the night! I'll
be revising this one, for sure.
|
Greta_Prewett
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:33 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Really nicely done!! |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:29 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thank you!
|
happydog
Thursday 30th June 2005 19:14 | Mixing Temperatures |
Absolutely smashing! Tops! I laughed! I cried! I turned into a canary! I got better…
But seriously, this one is good.
I do have to disclaim, however that I am Pirate Ginny's beta. Hopefully the vote counters won't count that against me .
Happydog. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:28 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| lol. Thanks, Happydog.
|
Cambryn
Thursday 30th June 2005 12:42 | Mixing Temperatures |
| Aw, that was adorable. |
| Wednesday 6th July 2005 21:27 | Mixing Temperatures (Author Response) |
| Thank you. :)
|
