gymnastgal19 Monday 21st April 2008 21:24 | Little One |
I love this story!!! So awesome!!!!
That must have been so hard on ginny to have to give up on harry and try to move one... at least she would have had the baby... but yay! he managed to escape!
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gymnastgal19 Friday 30th November 2007 20:58 | Little One |
interesting... really short... I thought that ginny and harry's reunion might be a bit longer and more sweet, but i guess when you are in labour... lol
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harry fanatic Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:27 | Little One |
OMG. that was AWSOM! I loved how you did all of those flash backs. great job! |
harry fanatic Monday 18th December 2006 19:49 | Little One |
That was the sweetest story I have read on this web site . The name for there son was perfect . |
lacyrachil Monday 11th December 2006 11:13 | Little One |
I like the idea of Harry on a chocolate frog card...makes sense. Nice story idea just be careful of using some generalized terms too often. Great job. |
Novera Tuesday 11th July 2006 21:29 | Little One |
Awww,
Soo Sweeet
i loove ittt!!!!!! |
PrettyRaven Wednesday 13th July 2005 09:59 | Little One |
Great story! I have one quick comment. Is the baby two weeks or two months early? Because two weeks early isn't really even considered to be premature, and the baby wouldn't be at any risk if he were born two weeks before the speculated due date. Otherwise, great work! |
SillyGillie Tuesday 5th July 2005 21:41 | Little One |
Interesting! |
ivy_the_strange Tuesday 5th July 2005 08:39 | Little One |
Wow that was a great story! the dates for the Harry Potter Card threw me off for a sec... but it was a beautiful story. I love the baby's name! Will it have red hair too? |
TigerLily8186 Tuesday 5th July 2005 00:00 | Little One |
Awwwww. Sirius James. How cute. It was amusing how Ron kept calling her Gin. It fittingly ended with just the right amount of fluff. |
PadfootLives12 Sunday 3rd July 2005 17:03 | Little One |
That was so beautiful! It made me cry!!
That was just...so....awwww!!!
-Padfoot Lives
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weasleysrcool Sunday 3rd July 2005 03:39 | Little One |
You know, I read them all, but this one, the last one was the one that moved me the most. Here's my vote, hopefully it will matter. This was a wonderful story, and I really loved it. Thanks so much for sharing with us. |
malko050987 Saturday 2nd July 2005 07:31 | Little One |
Touching. *wipes tear away* |
flyawayflowergurl Friday 1st July 2005 18:59 | Little One |
awwwwww!!! the way harry shows up @ the end is so cool!! i love it!! |
Fuzzy Friday 1st July 2005 14:21 | Little One |
This has got to be one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. I just loved ending
" 'Welcome to the world, Sirius James Potter,' they answered in unison, choosing the name that they had agreed upon long before Ginny knew she had conceived."
It's absolutely perfect!
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Rosebeth Friday 1st July 2005 12:44 | Little One |
That was really sweet. Nice job. |
Arnel Friday 1st July 2005 00:51 | Little One |
I’m really glad that Harry was able to come back to Ginny in this story. In your other stories his disappearance/death has always left me feeling quite sad. I love how protective Ginny’s family is of her at St. Mungo’s...You’ve done nice job of showing their concern for her and their delight that it really is Harry who makes his appearance at the last minute. This is a nice story and I really enjoyed beta-ing it for you. |
queen maebh Thursday 30th June 2005 20:31 | Little One |
I've always loved your work, and this story is no exception.
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melray1228 Thursday 30th June 2005 20:01 | Little One |
That was so sweet!! I loved it! |
Kelleypen Thursday 30th June 2005 17:36 | Little One |
Cool idea. Harry's reappearance was too pat, too easy: Not enough back story to explain his absence and escape. I had a hard time believing it. Then there were a couple verbs that were out of tense--set my English teacher teeth on edge. I think the short time limit and short length limited what you could do with so big an idea. Your idea, however, was quite interesting. I'd really like to see this rewritten in about ten chapters. I promise I'll read it if you do. |
juliet Thursday 30th June 2005 15:32 | Little One |
I am so glad that Harry came back. I thought I might have got a
bit choked up there for a while. Good story, a little rushed at
times, like there was too much trying to be in it.
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Melindaleo Thursday 30th June 2005 14:41 | Little One |
Awww, sniff. I knew Harry would make it in time. I want to know more though...is Harry all right? What did they do to him? I want to see his emotions on finally at long last getting a family. |
gemz1313 Thursday 30th June 2005 11:56 | Little One |
This was really good, very emotional, He came back! Very good story, well done your a brilliant writer
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Laurel Carmer Thursday 30th June 2005 10:57 | Little One |
I've read so many stories about Harry being thought dead, but I love every one of them.
If Harry defeated Voldemort at the end of his seventh year, then that would be 1998, not 97.
And Harry was born in 1980, so his first encounter with Voldemort was in 1981, because he was a year old. |